This story is a sequel to Where the grass is green, and the girls are... PONIES? (Chapters Revised)
In this story Chris wakes up to find he has been dead for almost a year, and what his death has done to the ponies of Ponyville, join him as he attempts to undo what damage he did and try and take control of an evil force that surfaces during this story.
2021 Edit: Please be merciful these stories are a product of their time and my inexperience in writing, that said please enjoy what you can anyway!
No. Fucking. Way.
:D!!!
1414778 i knew you would like the start of the flutter human ship
IT HAS RETURNED!!!!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Yay! It's been published!! :D
1414806 Continue with this ship. Make sure it's even more unsinkable than the titanic ever was.
1418618
You.... ponified him?
1419046 If thats what you want to think, go for it
make him an alicorn get the best of all three
1419055
....I am conflicted.
Also, Y U NO HUMAN X 'SHY!?!?!?!?
You titanic-ed it.
Bah, he's a pony now. Im out.
OH THANK GOD!
THANK YOU!
I LOVE YOU!
no homo.
But then
WHO WAS PHONEwhat was that beam of light thing?1419571 it WAS ponifing him, but it got interupted, but then realized he did not need to be a pony to love Fluttershy, I wish more stories would do something like this, the same old ponified thing gets old
1419589
:O
1419652
I heard nothing
(First time using a pony emotion or whatever)
Yay! Someone is dying! That totally made up for the near ponification!
I'll admit it, you got me.
So Celestia is dying, eh? Oh well, people die, life goes on.
1419947 mmhmm, except you wont be saying that when you find out why it is such a big deal
1419055 i know your the writer and have your story how you want it and no matter the choice i will still read it but please keep him human (unless this is what you wanted us to think and were nevere going to turn him into a pony but thats probably wrong)
Yay!
I am so happy he is back!
And everypony should keep their hives off him but fluttershy!
Muhahahaha
Can't wait to read your story! Gonna stay up even though I got pt and work early in the morning!!!!
Aww I wanted to see what twilight a, rainbow dashes, and apple jacks reactions were. I think they would have been a little less accepting that he simply came back from the grave.
Italics error my friend.
I figured out what happened. That line that said "The next day I woke up after the best nights sleep I have had since I came to Equestria," that means his "dark side" so to speak, was taken away... Celestia, you took his dark side didn't you.
Omg you had me going with him being ponified! U sly bastard
Oh my Celestia
1419144>>1419117 I concur
1419961 Sprinkles
1421529 Holy shart, that is exactly what i was thinking :)
my head hurts
1421494 don't worry, later in the story it explains it, he doesent even know how he came back
no first's for ANYPONY! MUAHAHAHA
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You just LOVE toying with our emotions, don't you?
1424438
He is alive but he isn't ch any more he is dark cj
Confused... again :I
pinkie destroyed eight walls of the universe and cj said she hasn't broken the 4th wall yet so shes back tracking through the walls to break the 4th wall wuuuuut
my head hurts!
Don't even TRY to tell me to write something about pinkie that makes sense, we all know it won't work
Good chapter. Also I agree with the whole add a happy chapter to balanceout the sad a bit. Get a good start on the next one.
HOLY SHIT!!
My popcorn is ready.
Anyway, awesome chapter, Vinyl is a squish, can't wait for the next one.
1433521 thanks
Ain't no party like a pewdiepie party!