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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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A exciting story I was not expecting to see, can't wait to read when I have the time

Damn, I really would love to read that right now, but thanks to that surgery last week i can't. At least not for another two weeks.:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I like it, I hope you make more

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There are going to be five chapters!

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It'll be here waiting for you!

It's funny how phrases like this still exist for a species like ours, which does not actually have feathers. :rainbowderp:

Fallout 4 character creation looking cover art.

Dayum

Dude really just got sent to Equestria by Ted Kaczynski.

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To make it a true Fallout 4 character creation coverart one has to be fuck ugly abomination and the other beautiful as hell.

Heh, he would be rather suprised in the morn when the post nut clarity pass

This a proof that you can write stories that are less than 20% porn.

Love the approach though.. also I almost expected think with portals.

After reading this chapter, while enjoying the premise, I am a bit leary about the RGRE aspects.

Male gender roles are quite complex, but most previous RGRE stories I have read have just plastered a veneer of toxic masculinity over their characters.
What you end up with is an entire society of incels and misogynist.

I really love your writing so I hope there's more to the personalities than, "Hey good looking. Make me a sandwich."

On reflection, it must be hard to reverse gender roles for a society that, in practice, already does away with most of them.

11869677
Just give the next chapter or two a chance
My take was sort of like 1940s-1950s USA - not overtly sexist, although traditional™ roles are definitely a thing

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the 40's and 50's were pretty lousy with overt sexism in their own ways, a lot of working class women who worked in factories during the war getting the boot so that the men could come back in, the enforcement of the nuclear family model which would see a lot of middle class women hooked on drugs, and of course the 'good ol' lobotomies that were advertised to men as means of controlling 'hysterical' women.

that said yeah in terms of sexisim it wasn't overt enslavement, more so social structures that encouraged specific things.

which in a 'reversed gender roles' context... ill be interested in seeing what ya do with that, even if im guessing your going for a less extreme version of that stuff.

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Some Leech has multiple quiet good none or minimal porn stories. Here are a couple I could grab fairly quickly, probably missed more than a few

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/475150/the-next-chapter - An interesting take on post-end of show, no porn
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/500595/a-perversion-of-parole - comedy of the terrible trio, no porn
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/490400/to-neer-come-down-again - probably fails the <20% rule, but quite sweet Chrysalis/Anon.

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Yeah, I know and I was facetious, Some Leech and I might have intersected and had some common buddies in other social networks before.

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I feel it’s also important here that the mare seems to think she made a sex-bot of sorts, a boyfriend golem. She really doesn’t understand what she’s done

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Maybe we'll get some insight from other stallions on the matter! :twilightsmile:

Yo, I'm usually here for the porn. But this story is awesome Leech! Well done! I can't wait to see how this turns out!

This definitely has me interested. Can't wait for more.

Edit: Oh. There's a new chapter up now. Welp. Time to read it I guess!

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This is a travesty! How bitterly short this sweet story will be!

It’s only been two chapters and I already know that im really liking this Sapphire and Nimbus pair. That first chapter felt pretty romantic. Also her character seems super familiar for some reason? Maybe it’s just the cover art, idk.

Also I think it could have been kinda neat to have the foremare and Nimbus get into more of an argument/altercation from his earth gender role clashing with her pony one. Maybe a verbal threat or some other irate rebuke? Maybe he could’ve shoved her away or made physical contact? Ehh… just a thought, I’m not sure how that may have affected the rest of the plot.

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I agree with 11870439 here. I'd read a whole lot more than five chapters of this.

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Who said there isn't a sequel in the works...?

Knowing you as a writer I can tell that this can become an amazing story that doesn't just drop off the face of the earth when it comes to rgre stories. I CRAVE more updates

What she said:
“It’s a toga ~ right?”

What I heard:
“Brave choice to wear a bedsheet cutie.”

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*sqeees in Paradigm Shift*
:pinkiehappy:

Nice, this site needs far more RGRE stories. Hope your version includes herding as well, I love writers depicting dynamics in the group :pinkiehappy:

this is one of the best stories of all time ohmygod

Great ending to a chapter, sure a cliffhanger but still a nice one. I wonder if you'll manage to squeeze in a bit of internal mare herd dynamic :rainbowwild:

Ah great, and given what I know of Twi in rgre stuff, she's gonna be a complete bi:yay:

It is so funny that the first chapiter is all about how person masturbate and having sex with pony, while the later chapters just don't have any porn at all.:trixieshiftright:

Abandoning the bed sheet, he virtually flew back to Sapphire’s house, crashed against the front door, and fought to let himself inside. Equestria was a den of wolves, ravenous, lusty predators, and he was the newest item on the menu. He may have been wrong about it - heck, he prayed he was wrong about it, yet the notion that he was in a world where the gender roles had been reversed, something that should have been titillating, was terrifying .

Well now you know what women go through!
any women can confirm?

Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship

dear twilight, ABORT MISSION! do you want to draw attention to the pony that showed up due to the anomaly?

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Thats what i like the best
Plot!
literally
Sometimes a good M Fic is one where you can enjoy it any time!

11871484
It's called a hook, a technique to pique interest.
The first chapter is quite spicy and erotic, yes, although it leads to a broader, far more compelling story.

The plot grows ever stronger

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well, I guess I'm a fish then.

pls don't be offended, I won't read until it's finished. It's a personal qualm not you. I like to download finished fics to my kindle paperwhite to reread whenever I please, using the writers name for the author slot so I can always remember who wrote what. I look forward to reading this one when you've finished it, it would make an excellent addition to my growing collection of so far 162 fics.

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No worries! The fifth and final chapter will be going up in approximately 2.5hrs!

Cute ending although I want way more now

11872227
Mentioned it earlier, but there's a sequel in the works.

Caught up to speed. I’m enjoying this story so far.

Una

Great story. It's a shame we couldn't get a few more chapters though. It just seems like alot of interesting details were skipped between chapters with the reverse gender rolesm

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Gotta pace it

Full disclosure, there was discussion of a second novella as this was being written - bearing that in mind, there's going to be a LOT of stuff in the next installment. Also there's some gradual bonding between Nimbus and Sapphire in this that could lead to some fun stuff.

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I was about to say that this was too good to just end like that, so knowing that there's a sequel in the works fills me with joy.

Also, thank you for the lovely read.
I greatly enjoyed it and I'll be looking forward to seeing where it goes next.

Nice story, it definitely needs a sequel :pinkiehappy:

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