It is so funny that the first chapiter is all about how person masturbate and having sex with pony, while the later chapters just don't have any porn at all.
11871484 It's called a hook, a technique to pique interest. The first chapter is quite spicy and erotic, yes, although it leads to a broader, far more compelling story.
pls don't be offended, I won't read until it's finished. It's a personal qualm not you. I like to download finished fics to my kindle paperwhite to reread whenever I please, using the writers name for the author slot so I can always remember who wrote what. I look forward to reading this one when you've finished it, it would make an excellent addition to my growing collection of so far 162 fics.
I love it when authors acknowledge how powerful and scary Twilight can actually be, just by the virtue of being the ruling Princess and the Element of Magic.
The clueless human being scared shitless of, of all possible ponies, Twily is always a hilarious thing
Aside from that, a really fun chapter, going to take on the next one asap
Great ending to a chapter, sure a cliffhanger but still a nice one. I wonder if you'll manage to squeeze in a bit of internal mare herd dynamic
Ah great, and given what I know of Twi in rgre stuff, she's gonna be a complete bi
It is so funny that the first chapiter is all about how person masturbate and having sex with pony, while the later chapters just don't have any porn at all.
dear twilight, ABORT MISSION! do you want to draw attention to the pony that showed up due to the anomaly?
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Thats what i like the best
Plot!
literally
Sometimes a good M Fic is one where you can enjoy it any time!
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It's called a hook, a technique to pique interest.
The first chapter is quite spicy and erotic, yes, although it leads to a broader, far more compelling story.
The plot grows ever stronger
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well, I guess I'm a fish then.
pls don't be offended, I won't read until it's finished. It's a personal qualm not you. I like to download finished fics to my kindle paperwhite to reread whenever I please, using the writers name for the author slot so I can always remember who wrote what. I look forward to reading this one when you've finished it, it would make an excellent addition to my growing collection of so far 162 fics.
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No worries! The fifth and final chapter will be going up in approximately 2.5hrs!
I love it when authors acknowledge how powerful and scary Twilight can actually be, just by the virtue of being the ruling Princess and the Element of Magic.
The clueless human being scared shitless of, of all possible ponies, Twily is always a hilarious thing
Aside from that, a really fun chapter, going to take on the next one asap
It's funny, she believed his story twice in this chapter.
Twilight is being very lax if she is sending letters for perceived potential threats.