How did the festival in Starlight's village get its name? Perhaps a certain pony wandered into town one day, a pony who knows firsthoof about making a huge mistake, and what's needed for everypony to get over it...
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How did the festival in Starlight's village get its name? Perhaps a certain pony wandered into town one day, a pony who knows firsthoof about making a huge mistake, and what's needed for everypony to get over it...
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i see what you did there . .
also:
lapse in attention while editing something i guess
But everyone called her Slim Shim.
Imagines Sunset Shimmer shaking herself like a dog and getting all fluffy.
It's kind of important not to let yourself be controlled by deranged individuals though.
Tries to figure out how a spell which creates fire is related to Shadow.
"It is beyond you."
You realize those aren't mutually exclusive right?
Aww!
It makes so much sense that Sunset gave Starlight back her village and never told her. Classic Sunset.
She's the lone Shimmer.
I smell a Sunset Alicorn story coming on.
Beautiful story, this could have been canon; it's so well written, you intertwined the lore with this story so nicely.
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Thanks much! That was the goal here, so it's great to hear it works well for you.
Also, this is about as close as I get to writing a human-in-Equestria story -- except the "human" in this case was already a pony to begin with!
Great Story.
Can you make an epilogue chapter?
Something like “all the princesses show up in the town and slowly discover that sunset was there and realize how much she grew. I always loves stories with sunset proving herself as good leader and making up for past mistakes.
That does explain Rarity’s disguise at the Sisterhooves Social.
This wouldn’t work in most places, but the village was populated entirely by former victims of a megalomaniacal unicorn. Sunset had an unfair advantage.
Heh. Went and predicted the plot by accident. Wonderful to see Sunset’s unwitting progress on the path she thought she had abandoned. Thank you for a lovely read and a compelling answer to one of the…
Well, I can’t call it one of the more perplexing questions of that episode when “How did the changelings capture everypony?” is right there, but still, thank you for this.
I wouldn't mind at all if you did a sequel set after Starlight came back, and after she had met Sunset, and they both ended up at the town together on the day of the festival. Add Trixie into the mix and you'd be set up for all kinds of shenanigans.
Plus, maybe they'd reveal the town's new name (or old one)...
I've always been intrigued by the post-Starlight fate of Our Town - I feel like it would be really interesting to see how a village of broken people come together and start anew. It's great to see some of that here.
Now I want to see a direct sequel where Sunset shows up at Twilight's castle to go back to CHS and finds out that Twilight has taken on Starlight Glimmer as her student
This is a nice story and Sunset will have a chance to meet Starlight as soon as she reaches Ponyville.
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I agree with dvd1442. If youbare willing, I would LOVE a sequal or epilouge where Twi and Celesria find out Sunset was in the town.
Maybe when they are at the festival, as per the end of To Where and Back Again, they overhear a pony named Sunset being mentioned, and grow understandable curious?
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Right? Like talk about full circle!