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EileenSaysHi


Clinically diagnosed with SciSet Brainworms

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Don't have time to invest in a long story? Or even a one-shot? Never fear! EileenSaysHi is here to save the day with their collection of entries from Loganberry's Flashfic group, which hosts the monthly Flashfic150 competition! I post a new entry every month; check out the group if you want to read new entries while they're still in competition.

This fic serves as a repository of past entries, beginning with December 2021. As you can see from the chapter names below, each contest is built around a prompt. In general, these are all unrelated stories, unless otherwise specified in Author's Notes. If a story won an honor, I will describe that in the author's notes.

The majority of entries are Equestria Girls stories, with a few FiM and G5 entries mixed in. All entries are either E- or T-rated.

Enjoy! New entries added at the end of each competition.

Featured on 8/28/23, 12/29/23, and 2/27/24!

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 72 )

Hahaha, honestly this could be a funny premise for a story

Hahahaha Oh, Dash, you big moron. I have to admit I never really considered Rainbow would see things in slow motion due to her speed, that seems very useful if she can control it.

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I’m mainly basing that idea off of the “Run to Break Free” video, and also “ Constructive Criticism” where Rainbow has time to fully interpret and create a stage design based on Applejack’s vision board (and also read AJ’s diary) in seconds. It’s innately a geode power, as Pony Dash utterly fails at doing something similar when setting up the festival in The Movie.

I, as someone who likes flashfics, and has enjoyed reading EileenSaysHi's flashfics, think this anthology is a great convenience.
:twilightsmile:

This is hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

Something tells me that Sunset had met Santa before in her bullying phase because she didn't got any presents :trixieshiftright:

That is indeed a body changing mirror :pinkiecrazy:

And then Rainbow uses her geode too much that Sunset can read Rainbow's mind from far away and know where she is :raritywink:

And then came the Friendship Laser Beam

Intra-Dazzling ships never quite feel right, simply because of their toxic yet codependent interpersonal dynamic. This is a heartwarming moment, don’t get me wrong, it’s just hard for me to reconcile it with how I view the characters.

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Huh. I definitely did not intend for that to feel shippy, just a moment of Adagio being a bit more humanized to fit the prompt. Maybe using the word "soft" was a mistake.

EDIT: To quote how I put it in discord (for others): The idea was meant to be that Adagio is relaxing, just a little, post-Rainbow Rocks. Not enough to let any of the others challenge her authority, but enough to let them indulge in things that make them happy, rather than her past full-on dedication to the now-lost cause.

So yeah, more sisterly bond belatedly developing.

The reveal at the end, the FREAKING REVEAL AT THE END. This was just so wonderful.

“… Wait, there’s how many humans on this world? But Celestia’s right here! This has to be the most important place there is!”
Flash sighed. Anime had lied to him. Magical alien girlfriends were a massive hassle.

I thought too that this was a sisterly bond.

Also considering at which time you set the fic, it makes it even stronger for me, considering how Sonata could show later her favourite food on her costume.

Trans Starlight?
Edit - Looking at the chapters title MIGHT HELP ME, derp.

I read that as "ShortSkirts wants ya to write about what now?" at first, and the idea of Fluttershy fielding prompts from SS&E was so delightfully meta I was a bit disappointed when i realized my mistake.

In any case, excellent meta-story. Sometimes writing about how you have no idea what to write about pays off.

So short, and yet it Hits. Great work! :heart:

Ooh, very nice angle I hadn't really considered. Wiping out a relationship isn't something done lightly, and forgiving it isn't any easier.

Wally does occasionally need a newspaper to the head highlighting how selfish her revenge truly was.

"She depleted the school's hate reserves." Wallflower giggled. "They didn't have anything left for us."

This is perfect Wally humor. And yeah, every future villain has to live up to Sunset's history with CHS. I do wonder how it would go if Twi has stayed in Crystal Prep, or the Dazzlings had remained in CHS.

Another lovely moment between these two. If anyone can appreciate a joke about someone being a hate sink in the thermodynamic sense, it's human Twilight.

Sunset does have a fiery temper. :trollestia:

Sunset turned away from the video game on her screen and beamed at her. “You too, Princess.”

Okay, sure, funny flashfic, with a good punch, but why is Sunset playing video games when The Highness Herself is visiting her? :pinkiecrazy:

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Eh, why wouldn't Celestia be curious about how her former student/surrogate daughter spends her days?

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Hm, makes sense if Sunset later on showed it to her. It just appeared to me that Celestia just entered, and then Sunset immediately went/continued playing video games, but that's the boundaries of 150 words :trixieshiftright:

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Now I'm imagining Sunset trying to explain streaming to Celestia, and it's a delightful mental image.

"So they give you you money to watch you play these games."
"Yup."
"Rather than spend that money to purchase the games themselves."
"I know, humans, right? I don't see how I could be more fun than— OH, YOU CHEAP SON OF A HOBBLED MULE!"
"Yes. Indeed. However might they find this more entertaining?" :trollestia:

“You’re right, I just gotta… trust in myself!” Izzy breathed. “So she’ll know that I was just trying to protect the big surprise when I hit her in the head and stuffed her in a sack, right?”

:facehoof:

Hey, it's a Bridlewood tradition going back generations. That's Izzy's story and she's sticking to it.

Hahahahahahahaha! Absolutely perfect!

Knowing Ray it'll soon decide for a nap, and things will be fixed.

“Okay, so maybe I didn’t fully consider how an interdimensional portal that turns dragons into dogs would react to me bringing a gecko the other direction…” Sunset winced as the sound of more screams echoed in the distance.

:facehoof:

Sunset very carefully didn’t mention how, destruction aside, she was entirely okay with this turn of developments.

Sunset nodded. "I just wanted to ask why, if you think you know... why Midnight didn't try to really go after the Shadowbolts, or Cinch. Why it was just this unfocused attack, when there were people who had hurt you so much right there... though I guess we'd hurt you too."

Huh, I was thinking the same thing myself the first time I saw it in 2015. :applejackunsure:

Twilight shuddered. "Please don't say that. You had every right to say what you said to me."

And here I thought Twilight would say the opposite! :pinkiegasp:

Makes sense. More than anything, she wanted to get away. And you can’t get much more away than another universe filled with novel phenomena to study.

"Misty! At this rate, you're going end up with a bucket of ponycorn for a cutie mark!"

Silence hung heavy for a moment. Opaline was halfway through congratulating herself on successfully reining in her minion before the delighted gasp shattered her concentration.

"Do you really think so!?"

What a ray of sunshine that creature is! Hahahaha!

"Twilight. What's the name of your Rarity's store in Ponyville?"
"The Carousel Boutique. But I fail to see how... Oh. Oh. Thanks, Sunset, I'm never going be able to look at Rarity's home again without thinking of this."

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Pony-Human misunderstanding will never stop being funny. Good job!

I'd wanna ride a horse! Shut up Cozy Glow. You're still on probation.

And that's another thing. Where do you get off lecturing us on animal cruelty when you suspended a child in a frozen state of mortal agony?!

It was pretty extreme darling. You left her without cupcakes. Without Cupcakes Twilight!

You should be ashamed of yourself! Um, if you don't mind my saying so. I am never coming back to this planet.

Can I ride the horsie now? No!

But you let Spike ride you all the time! Oh really? Shut up Rainbow Dash.

I'm guessing the plot of short story was Princess Twilight learning about horseback riding? :unsuresweetie:

:rainbowlaugh: nice twist :rainbowlaugh:

Though I would've expected Luna to be the one with the gardening hobby

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