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Just A Random Pegasus


I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.

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Night Glider has observed Hearts and Hooves day in her town for years: ponies have just simply acknowledged their fellow townsponies, since Starlight never wanted any love drama. No undying love was confessed, and no kisses were shared.

This year, Night Glider wants to change that. For both her, and her totally not crush, Double Diamond.

Awkwardness, embarrassment, and horribly cheesy pick-up lines ensue.

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Comments ( 28 )

A sweet and Happy Valentines Day story good job.

Such a cute story and perfect for Valentine's! Love it!

That was an AWESOME AND SWEET Double Diamond x Night Glider story! I love it!

God I hate valentines day. It's a baseless stupid holiday formed by executives and focus groups to alienate people who are in relationships into spending money on products and stores with the soul reason to boost profits during the end of winter holiday drop in shopping before summer and negitivly influences mainstream society by reinforcing the idea the poele NOT in a successful relationship have something wrong with them.

This story, for a breif moment, made me forget every word.

Happy valentines day.

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Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed! :yay:

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Thank you! I absolutely love the Double Diamond x Night Glider ship, and I'm glad to see someone else is fond of it as well. I'm happy you enjoyed! :yay:

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I'm glad the story changed your perspective on Valentines day, be it even for a second. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

A short cute story and couldn't hold in the daawws!:rainbowkiss:
Though I would always ship double diamond with starlight, this works too, and thwe fact that it made me start shipping get this means that this is amazingly well written :pinkiehappy:

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I'm happy you enjoyed! :pinkiehappy:

Honestly, I shipped Double Diamond with Starlight at first as well. I then started drifting to the DoubleGlider ship, and this story is the result. :derpytongue2:

I feel as if I should be erect by the picture...

It's working... Help me.

6934830 Just to simply comment, I'm also a fan of Party Favor and Sugar Belle. I'm not suggesting anything by that either.

Daaaaawwww! Thats was the cutest story ever! Much romance, very cute, many love! :derpytongue2:

Aww, it ended too abruptly. Like they didn't go into their crushes or have DD offer to split a banana milkshake. Nothing!

Desperately needs a follow up!

Good story. I have a few thoughts though that I'd like to share:

1. Cliche opener, but it didn't ruin the story considering this is supposed to be cliche (or am I wrong?).

2. A bit of an error on one of the pick-up lines?

"I feel the sun coming up... or is that just you lightning up my world?"

Isn't that supposed to be lighting or lightening? I don't think you want to shock the person into a coma or something.

It's not a pick-down line, it's a pick-up line, silly!

3. The ending was really, really abrupt. It just felt too soon. I guess it was because you focused all on the pick-up lines and not enough on the actual development of the relationship. It just felt too easy for her to get Diamond.

And... that's it.

I would like to see a continuation of this, if you may. The cheesiness is so perfect. It felt like a slip and slide rather than a sticky--

We won't go there.

But yeah, have an upvote and a follow from me.

I expect bigger and better stories from you now!
Not really, just write what you want to write. ;)

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Alright! Thank you for the review!

I'll be working on corrections later. I'm glad you enjoyed! :pinkiehappy:

Yay Night Glider. Best specops pon

Yay! These two are the show's best obscure-ship

"On a scale of one to ten, you're a nine and I'm the one you need."

That had me laughing for a whole two minutes! :rainbowlaugh:

"You like sleeping? Hey, me too! We should do it toget-"

Night Glider let out a small squeal and put the paper down. No. She was not going to use that one.

Fail. :rainbowlaugh:

Huh? Oh, don't mind me, I'm just taking notes...
I am sooooo using these someday. :rainbowlaugh:

After taking this in, a smirk formed on his lips. "Well... do you promise to give the kiss back?"

*Hnngg!*
*BEEP*
*BEEP*
*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...............*

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WE NEED A MEDIC OVER HERE! OR NURSE REDHEART!

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Preferably Redheart!

...

What?! She's hotter! :rainbowlaugh:

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I won't judge your *ahem* attractions :raritywink: :rainbowlaugh:



I have them too :raritywink:

Awww Night Glider is adorable! This is so adorable! :rainbowkiss: great job. I needed this. Thanks :twilightsmile:

Lovely short story

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