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Jade Ring


The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.

Comments ( 16 )

Man, this hurts. I really hoped they could be together, that ending just plain hurt. 😔

Well that’s not resonating with current IRL feelings I’m dealing with or anything…

Lovely story, I might cry about it later. Thanks.

Awe this is said really nice story

Well done, author.

Well done...

:ajbemused: Bloom Spike... We need to talk.
:raritystarry: Sweetie Belle... A Lady just... We Need to talk
:rainbowhuh: Spike what's this stuff going on here? We Need to Talk!
:twilightoops: Spike? They didn't know? I didn't know?
:moustache: So Dragons can make rocks pregnant, Who knew?:raritycry::unsuresweetie::applecry::scootangel:
:unsuresweetie: The Cake Queen and her sister knew
:trollestia: Don't blame us that was a thousand years ago, It slipped our minds
:facehoof: That's not all that's slipping - Herd rules
:flutterrage: Discord stop laughing

The story of life... could of would of and didn't

Wait until Apple Bloom learns that male dragons tend to need two partners due to their hoarding urge (that's my way of saying that the herd thing will probably work as a solution for all this)

I expect smut. Why would you make me feel emotions instead??? I hate you 😭

I would love to see a continuation of this. The tension of keeping it a secret versus the desire to tell Sweetie Belle and telling Spike how she really feels.

The barn was stifling, even with the light breeze that blew through the open doors. Ropes, reins, and other farming implements hung from the walls or swayed in the stalls in which they were kept. The air was heavy with the good farm smells of hay, wood, and old leather. The cicadas could still be heard, but their song was distant, muted, behind these heavy walls erected by Apple's some ten generations past.

Granny Smith was there when the farm was founded so at most it's four generations.

Otherwise, an excellent story. I teared up. Feels like it should have the Sad tag,

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You know what? I'll give you that one. I'll edit that.

And it does have the Sad tag?

For what appeared to be a generic clop story, this was actually quite well written, the bit of exploring on deeper themes than a lot of the other stories of this genre do are definite bonuses.

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'Cuz I didn't mean it as clop nor marked it as such. Clop/porn/erotica can be fun (lord knows I've got a couple on the way) but it's just as fun to examine the emotional ramifications of sex.

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Well you did a good job. And I agree that in skilled hands a story about sex can be a wonderful thing, but on the internet it's much easier to simply write something exciting. One of the very first adult fanfics I ever read was set in another cartoon universe and consisted of primarily "they boinked, blinked, and boinked again" for the entire story.

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Yeah, I guess I missed that the first time. Anyways, keep up the good work.

Pretty good and sad story. Wonder if Spike will ever do it with Applebloom though.

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