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Jade Ring
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This story... really hits me where I live.
Awww. This was a great addition to your Sunset/Flash series. Definitely understood Flash's frustrations coming home after a long day and the dialogue following that was great.
Definitely liked the sequel mention as well.
Ok. I had a laugh, and it was an enjoyable read.
I wish you the best with your future projects
The terms of his deal I acceptable
The struggle is real, but so is the reward.
Considering Equestria has actual swarms of 'Flyders' (Large spiders that can FLY) that are quite a danger to ponies, Sunset Shimmer's fear of spiders may not be unjustified...
On a small farm in The Middle of Nowhere, a purple dog just sneezed.
Cute story, I liked it. From the title I was expecting something much different, though; Exchange is also the title of the single best pony adventure story ever written, especially considering it was originally a greentext. That's just me though, it didn't take away from what the story was.
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I was just looking for a one word title to continue the aesthetic.
Guess the food stand gig didn’t work out
Yikes. That is one heck of a creepy alternate ending. Though given the kind of supernatural shenanigans Sunset and her friends have encountered, a mutated spider seems to be about par for the course. And, obviously, that spider bit Flash causing him to mutate.
A second possible alternate ending: Flash is OUTWARDLY unchanged, but has gained a degree of superhuman strength (albeit less than Applejack's level) and speed (albeit less than Rainbow Dash's level) as well as agility, a precognitive danger sense and the ability to adhere to and walk on walls and ceilings. With Sunset mentioning "Hopefully, he learns that with great power must also come great responsibility - BEFORE anybody else ends up paying the price."
Whoops. Sorry about that. Got caught up in my thoughts.
I know which book she's talking about. "Needful Things" by the Master of Horror, Stephen King. It's one of my favorites.
Poor Sunset, but that's always the risk of dating an Australian. Their skin walkers are spiders.
Enjoyable little thing, though I will say that unless one of the alternate endings actually depicts the blowjob, you could probably get away with a teen rating on the story.