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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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outstanding start i love it

I love your story’s can’t wait for the next one

Keep going. The story is good!

Normally I'm not a fan of very many HiE or Anthro fics... but you have me interested. :trixieshiftright:

Congrats on the Day 1 Feature. Let's see where this goes!

Here it is, the moment you've all been waiting for! A romance clopfic starring your favorite singer, the mare, the myth, the legend, give a round of applause for the singing sensation we all know and love: Songbird Serenade

Well, can't say you don't know how to do an intro

I start to sweat and my mind draws a blank. It’s so humiliating, I feel like I want to kill over.

I think you meant "keel over".

I’ll be ready fo you at 8:00 tonight

Missed a letter there? Typos happen.

I had to think it over for quite a while.and decided to give it a shot.

I thought you said you had an editor?
I kid, but other than these grammar mistakes it's a great plot.

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I do have an editor, we just make mistakes, that's all.

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I didn't mean any harshness by my comment. I just wanted to point them out for you.

I never really liked sia but this story will do just fine can't wait for next chapter

Amazing. I really noticed an increase in quality! Good work!

outstanding my friend who next is it princess skystar?
:pinkiehappy:

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Yeah who is up next? I say either Lightning Dust or Spitfire. Or, yeah, maybe Skystar.

Another amazing job. Keep up the good work

As a recommendation to one of our other readers, up next is Mayor Mare

A beautiful fic, like the others. Can't wait for Mayor Mare to have her a nice romance. Though Cpt. Spitfire would be hot too (pun much intended).

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Alright I know where to get the best pics derpibooru just look up busty mayor mare

Ok this is so cring I cant read. Story that’s in second-person has character with stage fright and a stupid scenario of getting to lay Songbird. Also the forced gun hated propaganda is another slight to this bad story.

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Well excuse me if the story wasn't to your liking

Yah had my curiosity...now yah have my attention...

As a massive music lover myself, I can't help but be jealous of this guy. Sia/Songbird has a gorgeous voice, and she's gorgeous. The innocence until the moment of the first kiss was sweet, and kept me excited for the revelation of feelings. The way these are not only erotic, but also have a good, solid, consistent story with them is a good thing. I also like how you have the couple's meet up with each other. Reminds everyone that this is all in the same universe. 10/10 keep up the good work!

Ha, All Dogs Go to Heaven reference

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Baritone's friends being named Charlie and Anne Marie

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Very nice! Incidentally, that is one of my favorite movies that I saw growing up.

“In my opinion, they’re the worst. They’re these metal objects with a curved trigger underneath the barrel. When you pull the trigger, these little things called bullets come out and they pierce right through a human’s skin. Depending on where you got shot, it’ll either hurt a lot or it’ll give you a slow and painful death. I got shot in the chest, so I bled out pretty quick. Someone did try to save me, but I didn’t make it,” you explained.

A gun is a tool and like any tool it can be weilded to beneficial ends or destructive ends, but it is the intent of who is weilding the tool that determines how that tool is weilded. A gun doesn't kill humans, humans kill humans and a gun is simply a tool used by which a human may be killed. Even rocks and stones can be turned into a murder weapon, but it is always how it is weilded and by whom which determines whether such actions are beneficial or not.

Comment posted by AuthorGenesis deleted Sep 17th, 2019

“No worried, just be a little mo-” Songbird paused as she turned around and saw you. “Hey, I remember you! You’re the human who crashed onto my stage last night,” she said.

Hahahahaha!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:SUCKER!!!

“Anyways, where do you plan on going now that you finished you’re finished in Canterlot?” Platinum asked.

why is this repeated? This should be "Anyways, where do you plan on going now that you're finished in Canterlot?

Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.
Richter said that to Emil from Tales of Symphonia Dawn of the new World.

‘ Yup… this day just keeps getting better and better, ’ you thought to yourself before you felt yourself passing out right in front of the pop star.

Soooo he just randomly passes out?

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How would you react if you bumped into a celebrity who happens to be an anthro pony?

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not pass out because A. I still would have little to no understanding about the world I'm in and would be more worried about that than a famous pop star

B. Wouldn't even go OUTSIDE because reason A.

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