Very nice

I start to sweat and my mind draws a blank. It’s so humiliating, I feel like I want to kill over.

I think you meant "keel over".

I’ll be ready fo you at 8:00 tonight

Missed a letter there? Typos happen.

I had to think it over for quite a while.and decided to give it a shot.

I thought you said you had an editor?
I kid, but other than these grammar mistakes it's a great plot.

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I do have an editor, we just make mistakes, that's all.

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I didn't mean any harshness by my comment. I just wanted to point them out for you.

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Alright, thanks

I never really liked sia but this story will do just fine can't wait for next chapter

Ok this is so cring I cant read. Story that’s in second-person has character with stage fright and a stupid scenario of getting to lay Songbird. Also the forced gun hated propaganda is another slight to this bad story.

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Well excuse me if the story wasn't to your liking

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why thank you

Ha, All Dogs Go to Heaven reference

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where do you see that?

Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.
Richter said that to Emil from Tales of Symphonia Dawn of the new World.

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Good eye there

“don’t let fear stop you from doing the thing you love.”

I sense a Sing (1st) reference from this specific line.