Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories
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Interesting so he's half dragon half man or human
If you get in a heated argument with a girlfriend drill sergeant, how will it go? Would she make you do 300 push ups?
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Nah, maybe 50 burpies and every time you mess something up, she adds an extra 50. My middle school did that but I never did the burpies because..... hmm..... fuck those rules.
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Man, burpees are the worst. Effective, but the worst.
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Like, I once forgot my gym clothes and they made me do 100 burpees, I, of course, didn't do them and they literally forced me to do it. I even got into a fight in the locker room. But I'm glad I switched to home schooling during Middle School and I am so glad I'm in a good High School.
Dude, if your still listening here's the terrorist's attitude
I like the story and the character’s backstory. Keep up the good work!
oustanding work my friend love it
Ok so I gotta get this off my chest.
1. That jet he crashed? Those suckers have ejector seats. The system woulda let him eject free from the plane the moment he saw it would hit water from a few hundred feet up. So he wouldn't have had to worry about surviving the crash, even of he would have been hassled for crashing an expensive as hell jet.
2. The blue angels are apart of the United States Navy. This means that ALL of its crew and pilots are members of either the United States Navy or the United States Marine Corps. Combine the fact that you have to be a military member to join the blue angels, you need several thousand flight hours, be carrier qualified and recommendations as a top tier pilot just to be considered to fly for them. Combine that with only being a member for a few years at most before getting transfered back to your normal duty flight, and chances are that even if the blue angels themselves don't see combat, there's a chance their pilots could still end up with combat duty in war time (because military)
Sweet.
I must be out of the loop. I haven't seen an update from you in a long time. Good to see you're still going.
It's definitely going to take a ton of effort for the protagonist to gain Spitfire's amorous favor.
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There's a reason why he couldn't eject: His jet was sabotaged
Can you do another involving Flitter? With tags like lactation, and other stuff like that?
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I might consider the lactation bit, but right now I gotta focus on Spitfire, patience goes a long way
Its been too long thank you the both of u
Israel Yabuki good job on chapter one of this story keep it up and brony on man.
Well, this should proove interesting. Looking forward to it.
been waiting a loooooooooonng time for this
Awesome beginning to this man
Nice OC development, did not see it coming when I read through about him being turn into a humanoid dragon, but it works where this goes.
At lease I expect to see Spitfire to do her Drill Sargent on him, like the episode when Rainbow Dash joins the wonderbolt academy and talking smack on Scootaloo about the wash outs.
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ejection rejection perhaps?
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It was sabotage. Someone rigged his jet so that he couldn't escape with his life.
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dang it, didnt see that one coming, it was the terrorist, meant to spread terror thorugh the high ups
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it's still to be determined, but I'm planning on having it be someone who works for the Navy: an engineer who held a grudge against the OC for some reason, which is why he sabotaged the jet
when will chapter 2 come out
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when my editor is good and ready. Remember, he's got college to work on and other writers to help out.
ok and you editor is do pretty good at edit
overall, it still a good story
Hey can u tell ur buddy he's doing a great job thank u đŸ˜€
Ur both doing a great job keep it up
When do you think you'll get around to making an anthro waifu story for derpy?
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she'll get a turn, just have patience
Ooooo I can't wait for the derpy story its going to be so cute
the wait is real but im patient
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Dude, same
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Best pony getting a story
keep it up my friend cant wait for the ending
This is going to be one of the best endings ever
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I definitely agree with you. It just has that ‘great ending’ feel to it.
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Amen
Another great chapter, keep up the great work.
This may sound strange, but I get the feeling that this will last for two more chapters before it ends.
Isn't Spitfire the drill sergeant? Also why is she named Spitfire?
Oh this is getting better, and we now know where the love start and making a first step for a happy ending for the two characters. Great work Israel and NineTailBeastBall, and brony on, both of you :D
Wonderful story
Good Chapter
The waiting is so painful but it will be all worth it when the last chapter comes out
Israel I just had a thought. Do you think that maybe Treehugger or Derpy should find husbands. Or maybe a man who gets pulled into Equestria should start a herd with Octavia Melody, and DJPon3 aka, (Vinyl Scratch)?
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I'll get to them eventually