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awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
Me too
a damaged heart can always be repaired if you have a heart that believes
And here we go with another addition to this wonderful series. Keep up the great work
Why Suri? She’s a jerk to Rarity and stole her ideas in the first place. Why can’t it be Coco or Sassy? But mainly Coco since she’s nice and all.
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yes all about suri is true but all that big talk is an act a fake persona
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What do you mean?
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I mean she insecure about herself and her abilities
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Oh.
With the character getting the job, Suri reads more disappointed than hopeful. It's the wording that puts it that way. I guess it's just me and how I'm reading it overall.
Please tag anthro, second person and human
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You have to keep in mind that, despite having met several humans, such as Silver, Fortis, Salvador, etc., she's still not used to them, so the idea of working with one disgusts her at first, but I plan for her to warm up to this human, kinda similar to how Crust and Spoiled warmed up to their human lovers.
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
now that"s a heart that believes Suri's heart has been tamed by diamond
Okay now you convince me.
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I think I get what you're talking about. Alright, I'll take that and wait for more updates to this. So far, it's a pretty good story.
Great Chapter
Who next?
"Angels are like diamonds they can't be made, you have to find them each one is unique."-Jaclyn Smith awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for more story from you
Nice story. Also, I was expecting that Diamond would grope her chest.
Plus, the anthro ponies have hands. You meant to say in good hands.
Ironically, she is an Earth Pony.
Ok, gota admit the lactating bit was a little confusing, was she still a virgin or was she already pregnant?
Great story! Can’t wait to see what’s next!
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She’s a virgin alright.
Like a good boy about to be taught a life lesson.