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Marik_Azemus


I usually stick to common themes in my stories. I like to have all the characters have a good reason for their goals. I shoot down any concept of fate. Also, there are always dragons.

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Hey cool! You released it!

I have to say I look forward to the rest of this.

...And why is wing preening so hot?

~Skeeter The Lurker

Shot in the dark, but, by "companionship and shelter from the snow", do you mean "sex"?

I see a Spitfire x Big Mac in the story's picture. If I don't see that in the story at some point, I will be very disappointed. The same goes for the Vinyl x Rumble x whoeverelsethatisinthepic. Make my fantasies cum true!

~SolidFire

To answer Rainbow: because Scootaloo doesn't have the blue and yellow yet. :ajbemused::rainbowderp::applecry::scootangel::trollestia:

Is that Vinyl and Rumble?
Is Rumble getting bitches again?

Damn cute Rumble!

Yes. Again. I'd give 1000 upvotes if I could.

Dat bar scene... Then dat romance... Then dat clop... Then dat chapter ending. :rainbowlaugh:

This is the first time I've read any of your stuff, and I have to say that you are every bit as good at writing as you are at drawing. This was awesome, and I look forward to more!

"I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going"
Have you by chance seen Pewdiepie?:pinkiehappy:

3501403 No, I just visit Memebase a lot. Not a fan of that guy.

I want to read Applebloom with Diamond Tiara and Silver spoon? but I guess Soarin and Bradburg goes next!

3502103 Confession: I'm doing this in an arbitrary order. So what you'll see next is up in the air.

3500420 And Dash is getting hers it seems, so :ajsmug: is sleeping with a soon-to-be.

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:rainbowhuh: I thought she already had hers, even if only as a trainee.

3503041 Yeah, but being a range isn't the same thing. That's like saying that having been a cabin boy, one is a captain.

Well that ending got me excited for what is to come.

“Why doesn’t just everypony in your family bang a Wonderbolt?!”

Well....AJ's banging you, Dash :trixieshiftright:

That ending line.

Says all one needs for this.

Also, Fire is best nick for her.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I know how much he loves big bazongas over mini maguppies.

:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp: what?

3530786 apparently, big Macintosh liked Titanic Ta-tas more than he does Miniature Mounds.

3531075 I know what it meant! Just........fuck :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I wasn't expecting it

3531989 That's what horse words do to ya. Surprise you every time somepony says handy.

3532087 Which reminds me. In the magical mystery cure episode, Applejack's part was "Can y'all give me a hand here and help me fix this mess." Give me a HAND here. And yet at the end of Equestria girls, Dash didn't know what hands were. :trixieshiftright:

3532397 Eeyup. Rarity had said "unhand me, you ruffians!" When being dragged into their slave dungeon.

Hands have been spoken of in one way or another throughout the show's course.

3532996>>3513416 Dudes, I'm expecting feedback on my fic. I don't mean to sound like a dingus but if you wanna have small talk, do it elsewhere.

3533728 Nah, you just sound petulant. Especially since our conversation has obviously ended already. And it was less than four posts each. And we've given you feedback.

Hmm... Loved the idea of cutie marks as a universal sign replacing... well, everything. Except maybe some kind of identification papers, and even then... Good call.

I dont like Mac or any ship with him though. So wasn't that fun.

Very VERY Good

Seriously can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

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Well, that's something new: Big Macintosh X Spitfire!! And I do love the image that Spitfire's stacked with D's (hence the bandages, probably hurts a lot if she didn't bind them for flight) And you can feel the love, not lust, between the two.

A little surprised that she has an apartment on the ground......kinda thought she would be in one of those cloud mansions.....IRL that is actually refreshing..

And definitely a bit of the things with the Apple family and Wonderbolts, even if Soarin' apparently showing up as gay (or at least goes both ways)===Soarin' X Braeburn, Rainbow Dash X Applejack, Big Macintosh X Spitfire.

I hope that Apple Bloom's shipped with Rumble, for two reason===1/ He's got wings, something about pegasi and earth ponies; and 2/ Rumble's got to be a Wonderbolt, or at least a Wonderbolt-in-training, that way it's a full circle. :pinkiehappy:

Also, I see what you are doing there with that image. I saw Pinkie Pie and Spike. I hope to see that one soon, though I wonder which way you're going to write out that Spike's not ga-ga for Rarity, or just didn't return his romantic feelings.

3822742 Hate to throw you for a loop, mate, but I think you should examine the cover art a bit more.

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*******re-views cover image*******

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

I'm ashamed that I didn't see that earlier.....so Applebloom's gonna get down with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.....and it looks like Rumble's at one of DJ PON-3's raves. At least the Pinkie X Spike one looks legit!

3823181 Rumble, Caramel, and Pon-3, sitting on a bed. One ridin' another, while givin' the third one head~

Does not disappoint! Great work so far man. Also, great to see a new pairing. :pinkiehappy:

ok, after finally givin this a read i gotta say that i likely :twilightsmile: n' definitly had to chuckle outta :ajsmug: pointin her somewhat-hidden gun towards her cuz n' his wonderluver :rainbowlaugh:

pretty awesome chappie :pinkiehappy: even if i havn't really dived into any fics dealin with fire or/and mac yet :ajbemused:. Anyways keep up t great work n' can't wait to see what pair u write next :rainbowwild:

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Dash isn't a Wonderbolt yet...

And then who does Apple Bloom bang?

...or Granny Smith?

This Easter, get ready to Rumble, with Cadburys new Vinyl Caramel body cream. :raritystarry:

So when we get a chapter between spike & pinkie pie?

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