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underrated Drake


Just a regular guy who has very little knowledge on MLP but a lot of creativity.

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I'm glad you got to the point and you didn't do 9 whole seasons

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Luna had finally made up her mind. If they were all going to have sex, then walking naked around the place made sense. Besides, it felt so good to be naked... Her clothes were left in her bedroom and she walked around the house

is this segment supposed to say luna?

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That my friend is why you ain't supposed to write 2 different stories at the same time, Luna, as in Princess Luna is part of another fic of mine called Phoenix, I was also writing parts of the next chapter while finishing this one.
Let me fix it.

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i have made similar mistakes myself

Very nice and cute story.

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It’s fine to dislike a story. It’s fine to leave a dislike. The voting system is in place to ensure ‘good’ fics are easy to find and get the attention they deserve.

But please, if you are even going to take the time to leave a comment, then at least take 30 seconds to objectively explain WHY. Criticism and constructive feedback is more helpful than positive reinforcement. A negative comment with no context is a middle finger straight to the creator.

Please sir more?

Haven't read the story, I just want to push some quick critique on the picture, where the bosoms look a bit lumpy and more like sacks of potatoes than breasts.

make a sequel i want to see what they do while pregnant and after the babies are born

“Yeah, but, our cash is running out and… well… we’re going to have to leave in the van for a while,” said Mosina

Is this suppose to be 'live' in a van?

Also is it down by the river? XD

He needed some time to think. He had never been in a situation like this, and somehow these three girls seemed to hit all his weak spots.

Hyper combo 😜☺️😝😜

He had never thought of himself as one of those guys that drooled as he saw boobs, but he had spent the whole meal looking at Mosina's big breasts... And at the other girls' smaller but also quite beautiful breasts.

I've got a feeling the girls are pretty aware of that. And they don't mind...

Ace simply broke under the pressure, and silently asked her to lock the door.
One surprise was more than enough.

At least for today.
Tomorrow though...

Ace couldn't believe it; he was being sucked by a girl! And a really cute one, and his childhood friend on top of that.

She is also a bat pone!

just realized that Echo from the story Echo wants your mangoes looks similar to the Echo in mine.

The Bat Pony "Echo" is actually a generic character originating from "/mlp/".
As such she isn't associated with any specific author or story.
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well this was hot but I just want ask you for something 😉 just a little thing a little itsy bitsy thing can you please update Icebreaker or cancel it if it's not going to continue just do something with it please this story is still hot though

Are any of these maids fighters?

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