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Pistache
NSFW. Just to see if it works out for me or not. Kinda burned out from writing in my mother-tongue-dead-fandom...
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So much yes!
So, uh, I really liked this up until the last little prank from Flurry. That's definitely a form of rape. He dd not consent to raw dogging and it's played pretty light-heartedly. It's super weird because up until this point she's really careful about consent. I don't mind content like that (at all) as long as it's consistent with the characters, but this doesn't feel that way to me.
Other than that, it was a fun little romp. Enjoyed reading it! Thanks for writing it.
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Thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed reading it! As to answer you:
The first kiss was also done without consent. It also qualifies as a sexual assault, at least in my country. So I feel like the last part isn't that surprising. Yet the fault is probably on me. I had the idea almost from the start and just didn't managed to properly convey that Flurry was the kind of mare that would do that through the rest of the story so that this moment felt logical. And yeah, it's played light-heartedly because I needed to finish the story on time. My bad on that.
Wow this was awesome!
Loved your characterization of Flurry.