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Pistache


NSFW. Just to see if it works out for me or not. Kinda burned out from writing in my mother-tongue-dead-fandom...

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Given there is a literally scene in the show where Starlight surprised Sunburst in his bedroom, I'm surprised this kind of fic didn't happen sooner.

11881108
Yeah, it screams "Walking in on morning wood" tropes.

I feel Starlight and Sunburst are the kind of friends that took each other virginity but didn't take things further then that to save their sanities.

11881112
There's potential for a lot of things, with either him being awaken or not. Right know I could come up with two or three other fic just with those two and that kind of tropes. I'm certain it has been done before tho, after all those years.

11881120
I wrote something similar in the vein of Starlight walking in on a sleeping Spike while he was dreaming of Rarity. Maybe I could do that again with Sunburst and tie into themes of Starlight being addicted to him, but too scared to tell him that she's been riding him in his sleep.

Give me a few days. I might post that as my surprise clop for this month.

11881129
Yes, that's what we need, more mental crisis with our clops.

11881129
I was going with a different direction for my follow up, more like Sunburst having doubts about them being dreams and his feelings with Glimglam, but it's in the same vein lol.

11881138
Don't worry. I'll make sure to reference your story as inspiration. Since you are mostly exploring Sunburst's feelings for your sequel, I'll keep mine exclusively Starlight's perspective in dealing with her addiction and Trixie or Twilight urging her to just talk to him,

11881142
Heh don't worry I don't have a monopoly on ideas for an obvious pairing. Do what you feel like you know. Mine won't probably be out for months anyway x)

11881145
This is the blurb I've settled on:

Trixie is tired of Starlight bailing on morning breakfast and returning hours later in a drunk-like state. She decided to ambush her friend this time, only to stumble upon Starlight's secret activities with a heavily sleeping Sunburst. Realizing the danger of this problem, Trixie decides to handle this in the only delicate way she can... as direct and blunt as possible.

This needs a follow up.

11881160
Go for it, don't worry ^^

Always good to see a Sunburst fic

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