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AndwhatIseeisme


I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.

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This was a really fun read, keep it up.

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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

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I always love any clop with sumburst in it, so awkward and wimpy, he is just so much fun

Sunburst winced as a damp wad of rolled up paper struck him in the face.

"No spitballs in detention!" he shouted at the two rowdy students under his supervision.

"That ain't spit, teach," Starlight replied, as she slouched back in her desk, legs wide open to display herself to him. "Wanna take a second guess?"

I spit orange juice all over my phone.:rainbowlaugh:

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Sorry, the author takes no responsibility and holds no liability for any damage caused to phones, computers, tablets, or other media caused by the reading or listening of his horse sex fiction. All sales are final, satisfaction not guaranteed, by clicking on this fanfic the reader renounces all rights and protections provided by the courts in relation to damages, either physical or mental, caused by the reading thereof.

Otherwise, I'm glad you liked it.

I need for of these 3 together...they’re my ot3

Was a fun short, though kinda curious which student(s) Trixie was thinking about.

Extremely funny, quite successfully cloppy, and everypony's in full character. Especially Trixie!

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It's kind of hilarious how they manage to screw everything up, and it even makes things a little sexier, not to mention staying closer to their in-show characters. Nothing involving these three -- especially Trixie -- is going to go smoothly and according to plan.
-Bic Mac -- The member of the Apple family who just really likes lighting things on fire
-"Making a noise" she replied -- lack of comma.
-he stroked the mares main -- two for one special! Buy an apostrophe, get the correct spelling of 'mane' for free!
-I don't think your being rough -- you're.
-her eye lid. -- eyelid.
-"How's that feel, you naughty little brat," Sunburst asked -- should have a question mark instead of the comma.
-There hooves wrapped tightly -- their.
-The part with Trixie in the middle between them was ridiculously rushed.
-The sexual climaxes were often short, cut off, or unfulfilling.
-I liked the interplay of the characters, which you did pretty well.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 89/100
Allure: 60/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 87/100
Prose Quality: 60/100
Total Score: 376/500
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Trixie never thought not having to work would be so boring. She leaned back, hooves crossed behind her head, hind legs up on the table, and cum dripping out of her ass and onto Princess Twilight Sparkle's chair.

I can already tell this will be a fun story. Trixie is at her best when she's a little bit of an ass.

"I didn't hear you complaining that night." Starlight retorted.

"Hmph. That's only because Trixie was gagged the whole time!" Trixie said indignantly.

Eyupp, time to stop commenting and start reading.

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