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AndwhatIseeisme
I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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Loved this story. I'd love to read one of Dash and Lightning dust meeting. A short fight ensues followed by some angry hate sex. Tribbing and anal strapon kinks
fucking hot! very nice as i had to drop my pants for this one! would be very fucking hot that in the distant future that they decide that they are ready to become mothers and what better way to ensure best genetics by both getting knocked up by Soarin at the same time! which would also mean hot preggers sex in the coming months.
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-A fairly competently put together clopfic
-Spitfire's orgasm came very fast.
-All the first round of orgasms came very fast.
-The final orgasms kind of lasted long enough to be respectable.
-Great sense of casual sex among the Wonderbolts.
-Kind of odd that we'd begin by reflecting on past times, rather than getting to this time, but okay.
-Those stories of past times are really hot though, and include just about the right amount of detail for quick flashbacks before the real story.
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Cloppability: 89/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 94/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 443/500
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