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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

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I am in awe. It's like you crawled into my brain and took out the story that I've always wanted to read and then wrote it far better than I could have ever imagined. I've been a fan of your work for a while, but this is just icing on the cake of amazing stuff. Up-vote, favorite, follow, you get all my love!

~SolidFire

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^.^ Thanks! I'm glad to hear it.

“Hey!” Rainbow cried out. “I'm, um...”
They all froze, staring at her.
Well, so much for that secret. “I'm not really into men.”
Silver's hand yanked away. “Oh, heh, sorry.”

I'll admit, this bit I loved most because while it was a fun clop story with a simple excuse for an orgy, they at least respected Rainbow's boundaries instead of the cliche 'I'm only into girls! But now suddenly I want his cock...' bit. I liked that especially ^.^

6584033
Good, good. ^.^ It was interesting, trying to handle that.

Watching the 5th Michael Mayers movie, so this isn't getting me anywhere, but still. Good story.

6586133
Huh. Maybe releasing clopfics so close to halloween isn't a great idea after all.

Now this is high-quality clop. Well done!

6599780
Thanks! What was your favorite part?

6599876
For starters, humanizing the Wonderbolts is always a tricky thing. Giving them jetpacks was a clever way to keep the pegasus-style individual flight, and offered a good opportunity for Rainbow to show off, and get chewed out for it.

Next, I liked the variety you gave to the female 'Bolts -- almost flat for Blaze, small for Rainbow, medium for Spitfire, big and fake for Misty, and big and natural for Fleetfoot. Speaking of which, Rainbow's reaction to Spitfire's chest was both amusing and sexy. :rainbowkiss:

Sex scenes were quite enjoyable, especially the threesome in the showers. The only addition I might have wanted to see was either Misty or Fleetfoot giving a boobjob in the background, but that's a minor thing. (Apparently, I and Soarin share a liking for big breasts!) Overall, it was a fun, sexy, snappy romp: the story was neither drawn out too much, nor rushed.

gay wonderbolt lolololololol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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Um, well... glad I could be entertaining?

You know what? I liked this, so I will give it a story.

Mmm, I can see rainbow's cocklust seeping in....

Thus, a sequel is required. :pinkiehappy:

6777911
Heh, maybe someday. I have a lot of other things to do.

6964437
Glad you liked it! ^.^
What was your favorite part?

Wow. I bow before you.
This was a true work of art.
I've read this a couple months ago and decided to read it once again today.
I don't regret it.

All hail the messiah of clop!
(I don't know if that's that great of a title but hey... it works!)

7198621
It's a good enough title to go on my (other) userpage!

7204124 you have another user page?

Im sad that Soarin didn't get to fuck her. We all know when Soarin and Rainbow get together things get hotter

8182518
Uh... and you don't want it to get hotter?

8184351 I just said it would be way hotter if they smashed, but they didn't :ajsleepy:

my bisexual self enjoyed this

8587552
^.^ What’s your favorite part?

enjoyable. Too bad Dash can't admit her bisexuality to herself, otherwise she could've enjoyed that a lot more.

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I’m sure she’ll get there eventually! ^.^

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Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part?

Comment posted by Spitfirebooblover98 deleted Feb 28th, 2022

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When she fucks soarin and will this profile pic get me banned or am I fine

11166890
It will probably get you banned, lol.

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Do you think it’s a bad picture

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It's a nice picture ... but Fimfic doesn't allow pictures of nipples.

This is one of those fics that I come back to a lot. It feels respectful in a way I didn't know porn could be, and it's super hot to boot! I think it was the first lesbian bits of a fic that felt... real, I guess? I dunno.

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Heh, yeah ... I guess I don't usually care much for the kind of fics that get off on degrading someone.

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