• Member Since 16th Jun, 2012
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Holy


What a beautiful Sunset.

Comments ( 18 )

Rainbow Dash looks hot in that pic.:twilightsmile:

Well then. I am please. (In more ways than one :ajsmug: )

Man, I say this a lot to you, but you never cease to write good stories. Albeit this one not as engaging as some others, but I am going to read any of your stories that you post, regardless of whether or not it's clop. :pinkiecrazy:

...I seriously need to stop saying this stuff on every one of your fics lol

RainbowxSoarinxSpitfire is one of the few OT3s I like, and this story didn't disappoint. Awesome read, man!

Wow. Um. That was the first clop story I've ever read... and it was totally hot O_o The prose was exactly where I wanted it to be, communicative without being sparse, detailed without being overindulgent. I got a sense of the characters through their dialogue as well, which means you articulated them really well.

I loved the way you did a bunch of different things in the one encounter. I felt like you could have cut some of the introduction, as the build up to the actual sex was a little too long for me... but worth it once I got there :x My only other thought is that I really would have liked to have more dialogue during the sex parts, especially from Rainbow Dash. I think it's really sexy when characters can't control themselves and end up babbling stuff while they're getting... uh. Anyway. :x

Great story, thanks so much for posting it! I really enjoyed it. :3

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Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.:twilightsmile:

You always find the perfect picture. :twilightsmile:

Nice story. There's something astonishingly hot about a girl fingering another girl's asshole right after it's been stretched out by a cock and pumped full of cum.

Geez, poor RD. I mean that's a lot to go through, she's probably gonna be super sore in the morning.

"So, uh... It's nothing /too/ bad, is it?"

So, uh... Why not put the 'too' in italics?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Because that's my message to myself to put it in italics when I go through and edit it, and I totally forgot to do that.

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Heh, at least it's been caught, eh?

Oops, forgot to fave. Very hot, though. I enjoyed this, mate.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Happy to hear that. :twilightsmile:

Well that was hot. Now all you need is a sequel where Twilight and Fleetfoot get involved in initiating Rainbow. Or they initiate Twilight. I'm not picky.

OMG that initiation is so hot. lesbian sex my favrits. :rainbowdetermined2:

i wanna be in a initiation like that <3:twilightsheepish:

Soarin just sounds so done with this.

That... was... awesome! :rainbowwild:

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