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There's more going on in the academy than most ponies realize... The newest graduates, Rainbow Dash and Cloud Kicker are in for more than they bargained for. But that's not necessarily a bad thing right?

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BWAHAHAHA!! Got him, Spits!
:rainbowlaugh:

This looks like it will be some fun.

You have my interest.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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That's the best kind right? That, or peanut butter...:unsuresweetie:

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yes

ps: fuck all your stupid pie flavors, everwun knows Coconut pie is the best

Awesome story, but you do realize it's a day early, right? :unsuresweetie:

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This is just the teaser... in case you didn't notice.:derpytongue2:

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If you want to write a review and you have the spare time, it would be greatly appreciated. I'm definitely not going to turn it down!

Please, oh please, continue this soon. We need more SpitSoarin' fics. Even if it's groupsex with the rest of the Wonderbolts...

Unless this is a trollfic.

I am not quite sure what you mean with time-skipped or ambiguously obvious... but just keep doing what you are doing now and everything will be O K E in my opinion, can't way for the next chapter :rainbowderp:

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***Two hours later***

What happened in that two hours?

2627462 Ah I see what you mean now, well though I am not someone to turn down the opportunity to get the clop scenes written out:rainbowwild:, if you feel you want to progress to "more interesting" parts of the story faster, that is fine as well. But in that case, please do hurry getting there :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Anonymous Assassin deleted May 1st, 2015

2627488 Had not planned Clop?! :rainbowhuh: nonono that wont do at all, you got such a nice setup going on here! :twilightoops:

Comment posted by Anonymous Assassin deleted May 25th, 2013

2627497 You should add a tragedy tag to the story then, tragedy for me reader :fluttercry:
.. No but seriously my vote lies heavily with the implementation of Clop... well never thought id write that sentence down:applejackconfused:

Comment posted by Anonymous Assassin deleted May 25th, 2013

A clopfic with timeskipped clop scenes is like a war movie with timeskipped battles. Write them out, fggt

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A clopfic with timeskipped clop scenes is like a war movie with timeskipped battles.

This is not a clopfic.

Write them out, fggt

If you want gay-themed stuff that will cost extra. My mind doesn't like to go there.

2630016 A story about sex that isn't clop?

Heretic! Heretic! Thou shalt BURN IN THE PITSSSSSS!

...

Ahem.

Yes, please, at the very least, lower the rating at this point so that we don't MISTAKE it for a clopfic. Because mature/sex is... Ya know... Indicative of such things.

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Because this story has slightly graphic sexual situations and an all around sexual theme, it has to be mature/sex. That's the rule.

Well I say go for it. If you're going to write a fic like this, then don't hold back. Go for the whole hog.

You get what I'm saying, bizarre expressions aside?

There is absolutely nothing wrong with being a perverted bastard that likes clop. :rainbowwild:

I say go for it. You seem to do quite well with the innuendo, lets see how you do with the real thing. :twilightsmile:

Told you in the blog post. Do what the story requires and nothing more or less.

Comment posted by Anonymous Assassin deleted May 1st, 2015

More

now




GET ON WITH IT ALREADY!

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Mmm... maybe if you ask nicely...

2640931 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase?

This got updated an hour after I read & favourited it. :scootangel:

This chapter, I liked it.. Another one! :coolphoto:
No but seriously, great job:twilightsmile:

Hmmm.. I don't remember seeing Cloud Kicker in the Academy episode. I read Lightning... got excited, then realized it said Lightning BOLT not Lightning DUST.

Oh well.

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Oh... guess the whole Cloud Kicker joining the guard of the Winningverse got blown away by the canon cannon.

If I was forming my own Wonderbolts team, I would take:
Fluttershy(super cute in uniform)
Lightning Dust(fave character)
Snowflake(YEEAH!!)
Derpy(Just because)

2686819 Well to be fair, all fanfics are AU anyway, and Winningverse takes place before the end of season 2, so anything can happen.

After all, Canon Canon doesn't show Cloud Kicker helping Fluttershy train for the Tornado, now does it?

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I don't recall Cloud Kicker joining the guard in the Winningverse...
I figured since Lightning Dust was essentially kicked out, the the only other logical choice would be a pony that is one of Rainbow's closest friends/co-worker, because teamwork is important. The only one I actually saw at the Academy, in show, was Cloud Kicker. Therefore, the best choice in my book, given input from Winningverse canon, was Cloudy. Not to mention, I really like her character in the Winning Pony series. She really deserves a character tag...

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