It's boring being cooped up in the castle all day. So when Illusion, Nidra, and Valiant try to find something to do, they end up creating lots of delicious chaos. And get grounded, of course, because pranking Starburst and causing her to run around the castle in a panic tends to get ponies mad at you.
Illusion, Nidra, Valiant, and Starburst are all young, with Starburst no older than six years old, and her cousin's aged appropriately.
Characters are OC's that are part of Kilala97's universe.
This story is for Kilala97's Fun Facts writing contest.
Fun Fact used: Starburst was afraid of Celestia's mane as a filly.
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That is so cute. Thanks for the fun story.
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Thank you! And also thank you double for putting the story in the group! I thought I'd done so, but eh. Laggy internet is laggy.
Short and sweet, I like it.
This was so cute, I nearly had a heart attack at the last scene. That said, there are some some small spelling and grammatical errors, I suggest you read through the story, you should be able to spot them easy enough. Fortunately they weren't too major or so numerous so as to interrupt my reading experience.
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Thank you for the kind words. I'll take a look for the grammar mistakes and fix them, thanks for reminding me about them.
This one is better than mine... And now I'm wondering if Kilala would make a picture of the last part. I'd die of diabetus, but it would be SO worth it.
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Thank you for the kind words! I read your story, "A Princess' Confidant" and I think yours is a good story, you captured the personality of Nidra (as I've envisioned it). I realize now I should post something on your own story...
That ending is too adorable.
As is the mental image of young Starburst running through the halls of Canterlot Castle, trying to escape her own mane.
Great story. And knowing the character (following her on devArt) it is such a great story about the trio. Would love to see the pic at the end. Though it did read a bit choppy. Not bad, but felt it could have been a bit more smooth. Good work and great story
Oh my gosh, this was too cute and adorable!