• Member Since 6th Dec, 2011
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This account is no longer in use. I'm leaving it up so people can read my stuff. If you need to contact me, send an email to dawnfade@gmail.com

Comments ( 166 )

This captured a lot of what my uncle went through when he suffered from dementia; very well written, Dawn.

Having dealth with this situation myself, this hit home, and it hit home hard.

Don't you ever stop writing.

really great man you captured the emotion perfectly:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I... I can't deal with all these feels. This brought rise to new fears and doubts about my dad's death as much as it brought some closure. I don't know if I'm crying from sadness or whatever else... :fluttershyouch::fluttershysad:

I agree with R-B-D.

Don't you ever stop writing, Dawn. :pinkiesad2::heart:

Yaiy, thanks! Finally a Vinyl Scratch story without a romance tag :heart::heart::heart:

Why you make me have feelings? :twilightangry2:

Excellent story, :twilightsmile:.

That was really, REALLY good

Dude! Just when I thought the worst was over SADNESS, falling like rain. Oh man... I don't even connect with this situation and I feel it. :fluttercry:

This is... actually, this is superb. Send it to EQD! This fic is too good to get only dozen of likes. :moustache:

Reading the comments here makes me nervous, are you going to make me cry Dawn?


Could you even handle the guilt?



Had to fight back my feels in class. Having dealt with this in my family, it hit close to home. Great story though, you captured the emotions perfectly.

Very nice a short but bitersweet story about Vinyl Scratch's father, it really tugs at the heartstrings. :pinkiesad2:

1308293 Lucky you, I was trapped inside the feels. I threw up emotion everywhere.:pinkiesick:

wth is up with these sad fics today first changes and then this:fluttercry::applecry::raritycry::ajsleepy::pinkiesad2:

I.... I can't........ :applecry:

Very well done my grandmother is going through what her father is so you hit home for me, :fluttercry: very well written can't wait for the next university days and nights chapters. Keep up the great work :pinkiesmile:

That was powerful.

Excellent job.

Based on the thumbs and the comments.... This story was good and sad..... Oh the irony.

I'm glad I've never had any particularly bad arguments with my parents... And I'm glad that I have a number of years yet before I lose any of them.

oh god, im in school and reading this.
now i have to explane to my teacher why im crying :pinkiesad2:

This was beautifull! I love it!

That was wonderfully written and very sad.

Nice work.

Holy fuck, them feels.
Very well-written, is this in the university days universe?
BTW, I'm planning to reference university days in a future fic Im writing, so I'll send u a link, dawn.

Huh, that was a touching story. Nice to see a story with Vinyl but without the romance. Your story is well written so that's a plus. Good job man, i'll looking forward to your other works. Best regards. :eeyup:

um what was the illness that her father had? if i dont know then i dont have anyone who experienced it and i dont have any emotion to understand the story with but ill try :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry:

What a lovely story. Reminds me visiting my nan in her nursing home...:pinkiesad2:

All I can say is well done. :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::raritycry:

Simple, and amazing.:pinkiesad2:

Same thing happened to grandmother. Little stories like this help me see past all the cynicism, bickering, and ignorance. The things this fandom produces often help restore one's faith in humanity.

Well done good sir. Well done.


Dementia. Memory lapses and losses resulting from old age or Alzheimer's disease. No known cure.

My hoof of approval for this one. :eeyup:

oh my god the feels... you have my adulation and praise. well done.

Is this written out of personal experience? I'm curious from an author's point of view, as people tend to write about things they have some connection with. Memory loss is one thing I haven't had in my life or anyone I know, really.

Really sad story. Sadness. Feels. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
Is Alabaster a unicorn?

You have allmost every reader commenting your Aweso0me story! and i gotta say, it truly was Awesome, Keep Writing PLZ!!!:raritycry:

WAAAHHH :raritycry: Dear, the emotion you pulled out of me; it hurts. If you haven't dealt with dementia personally, you've done a very good job of capturing the emotion of someone who has.

I'm crying. I have not come across many things in this world that make me cry. But this story does.

Fantastic job, written perfectly and executed flawlessly.


Bring back memories of my grandma nicely done sir/mam nicely done. :raritycry:

Right in the feels, man...

I was always ticked at the large number of bad dads there are, in fiction. Seeing a story like this warmed my heart and made me think about the day I'll be a dad.

A truly beautiful story, plain and simple. Wonderful job.

Thanks mate, you made me think of my good ol' Grandpappy with this beautiful piece of work. Thanks for making this, and making me cry. :pinkiesad2:

Wow, I... I don't have words enough to convey how painful this was to read. Vinyl's father slipping in and out of memories and her roller coaster of emotions trying to keep up with him were both beautifully executed.

Beautiful, yes.

My grandmother's beginning to lose her memory these days, so I know what it's like. You've captured it perfectly.

1308474 i know how you feel bro my grandma is in a nursing home with dementia too. only she is on the other side of the US away so i can hardly visit her. :pinkiesad2: wonderful story btw.

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