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Duke Moon II


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Awesome job, so heartfelt and hot with Spike and Vice Principal Luna. I really look forward to what you have lined up for this.

Okay. So, Spike originally became a cooking recluse because of what happened with Luna. So, this is going to be a 'Spike having the time of his life for his last year on high school before college story'? I will be keeping an eye on this.

This is great ! Waiting for more :pinkiehappy:

That was hot and steamy for sure. And if I could make a recommendation for who Spike should be with next I'd choose Applejack or Rarity.

7741217 Gracias y muchas gracias!

So Rainbow thinks Twilight was the one who took Spike's virginity. Will that lead to some problems in the future?

I love how he's allowed himself to be a tad cocky there, at the end. Good writing man. :twilightsmile:

7741840 Glad you like it and thanks for the fave!

I had to go back to the last chapter to see if it was mentioned. These girls are 10 years older than Spike? And I'm sure Luna is older than that. Are all six or seven of his friends teachers? We have yet to meet Fluttershy, Rarity, Applejack (we met Apple Bloom), and Pinkie. I don't know if Sunset is going to be in this story. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.

Excellent job. And I can't wait see what's next.

Hope Twilight would be next.

good chapter as usual, i had to say is a good story, but the only problem i had with it is that i dont recall where its mentioned how far his culinary college will be.

keep the good work sir

Three down, one to go. Though I have to ask. Where are Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, & Pinkie Pie?

8135153 Rarity will be in the next chapter when I get to it.

‘They keep aiming for my head,’ thought Spike as he gritted his teeth, his head in pain and agony. ‘Why…why do they keep aiming for my head!?’

This reminded me of a certain scene from TFS DBZ Abridged. Although that target was a bit further south... :P

Hello… This still going?

Luna just gave Spike permission to have his way with the women!!

Spike got her good.

All about that Rut Life.

Spike never ceases to woo the ladies, especially those who think they shouldn't be with him because of their rankings.

Now that is Passion and Love.

Belle doesn't want Button now after that.

This took me forever to binge read but by God it was worth it & glorious! All these amazing sex Spike is having with these women is simply fantastic to read! I can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

Not quite did the deed yet, but it's a start.

What a tease.

Hope for the next chapter. And hope Spike got the dragon in him let loose.

Getting ready Spike, Rainbow & Twilight may have given you the fun rides, but Pinkie is about to give you the main event!

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And....all about that nut life too

Why did you make the chapters so long?

So much action with the Pie Sisters

i love your story. the long chapters is hard to come by on fimfiction. especially with such interesting stories! thank you for your work and i cannot wait to see more.

Worth the wait and I really love your story.

Hope Dash and Twilight could get some action soon.

And hope for Applebloom to be get in all the action.

Their last name is Wayne? Does either of them dress as a threstral and fight crime? Now that would be a sub plot I would enjoy.

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Course not, she dresses as a Unicorn and fights crime as Unicorn Woman!

god damn this took you long lol

You really know how to entertain readers with your chapters. Now Spike can add he had fun with Applebloom, but now he has to confess to the other girls he's been intimate with

Welp, that was a lot of... crying and someone's first time that throws up so many red flags that I don't know were to even start.

will spike every get to Have sex with Twilight since last time it got cut short because of the bell.

I'm enjoying this story but, Jesus fuchen Christ there's a lot of crying. Multiple times every single chapter crying, hell multiple times every single sex scene crying. It's a good story but god damn all the crying.

While I really enjoyed the chapter I'm kind of disappointed that Applebloom finally seemed to get her foot on the starting line and in a big way, only to back out. The fact she thinks the other girls have been there for him more is just untrue. Spike was clearly starting to see her in a different light, but now that just feels like it means nothing.

They deleted chapters weird.

Well, nice knowing you Spike!

I'll be sure to let the cops know it was Discord! :rainbowlaugh:

Another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for what you do next.

Wasn't this posted already?

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