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While a thunderstorm brews outside the Zephyr Heights palace walls, a teenage Zipp Storm reads her sister a bedtime story.

Featured on-site 10/6/2022 - 10/8/2022
Featured on EQD 10/24/2022
Live reading by StraightToThePointStudios

* Proofread by LevelDasher
* Cover art by ScribblePotato
* Inspired by scenes from TYT & MYM
* Takes place several years before the start of G5

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

'My, what big, juicy apples you have.'"

That’s what she said. :trollestia:

Short, simple, and sweet. This was too wholesome. :rainbowkiss:

This is actually a pretty cute story I really like that especially how much these two hang out with each other even joke around with each other so cute this is pretty nice keep up the good work

Awww! Another adorable fic! You're great at making our hearts melt NavelColt, please never stop! :raritystarry::rainbowkiss:

These two are always adorable. Great work as usual Navel.

here's the banger that helped inspire the idea behind this short fic

Oh, I know that one. Good song.

A line in the song is referenced in the story. Can you figure out which it is?

This one.

"'I'm not the friend you once knew. Search your heart, you know it's true.'"

This was adorable.

So cute! I love your Pipp & Zipp sister fluff stories!

When you see a story about your favorite duo posted: :pinkiehappy:

When you see it’s from the guy that wrote your two favorites: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

She's not real, and neither are bat ponies.

*angry thestral noises*

I love your sister's stories so much! I look forward to your next one :)

Hey! I was going to post a link to that song when I read that line! :raritydespair: No fair!

Very adorable sister fluff. :heart::heart::heart:

I can't help but see both of them still as 15-year old teenagers from how immature they act in the show, but this fic sure gives me the adorables!

"No!" she squeaked. "I don't even like apples, Zipp. You know that."

Welp, I guess now we know they're not related to Applejack. Guess that narrows it down a bit.

Also, that song's gonna be stuck in my head again.

Those were the days! :heart: I never did find out what happened to Cinnamon Spring in the end...:twilightoops:

This is so cute, and you're so good at writing the characters. I could hear everything in their voices.


Pipp should get the castle to do a performance of A Shoggoth on the Roof for one of her streams.
Because buck the lawyers.

Perfect blend of cute sisterly teasing. Very well done :moustache:

That was absolutely amazing!

Well to be fair it is a kid show and hasn't been given enough time to grow beyond that yet, so we'll be seeing even "adult" characters acting childish for the sake of a lesson or its target audience. It was kinda the deal with FiM and its characters, too, in its early seasons! :twilightblush:

(Even in the real world, there are many who are adult only in age and number.) 😔

I totally understand what you mean with gen4 starting off more childish. I just felt like there was a lot of maturity there thanks to Twilight and her interactions with Spike from the first episode. I really hope to see the new gen grow up to be more multifaceted and interesting. It's just hard not to compare, say, detective Zipp from this early season to detective Twily on the train to Canterlot or detective Rarity in her amazing chiaroscuro-filled noire adventure.

And I definitely refuse to admit to being middle-aged. Only old people are middle-aged. I'm... youthful for my years!

Congrats on getting featured on Equestria Daily! :pinkiehappy:

(okay, it happened two days ago according to the timestamp, but I only just saw it now)

You mean the artwork?

No, the story (as you've figured out in the meantime if discord is any indication)

This was so sweet. I loved it. I always like these mushy fics.

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