The Sheriff is Down!

Maretime Bay has been blessed with a thick blanket of snow, and five ponies friends are outside enjoying the view. However, one prank by a pegasus sister is about to turn this nice stroll into something else.

Inspired by the fanart Snowball Prank Gone Wrong
By artist InuHoshi-to-DarkPen

Amazing reading done by StraightToThePointStudio here

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MatTheBook

MatTheBook #1 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 2 · ·

ITS WAR

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #2 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 3 · ·

XD, none of them could aim to save their lives.

Hillbe

Hillbe #3 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 4 · ·

🎶 I got the Sheriff 🎶 But I didn't get the Deputy 🎶

GusThePolarBear

GusThePolarBear #4 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Adorable stuff

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #5 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Well it looks like winter came to Maretime Bay and it looks like everybody are just enjoying themselves in the snowy fields and zipp wanted to have some little fun she tried to aim it at pipp but instead she accidentally hit hitch and then everything kind of went and circle and it became a snowball fight and of course Izzy had to be a little bit op when it comes to like that but then everybody gang up on her but it looks like they were having so much fun this was a very fun story keep up the good work

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #6 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

By the way there's a new name tag they called Sunny and her friends the Mane five

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #7 · Oct 24th, 2022 · 2 · ·

“That sounds like fun!” Izzy piped up in excitement. She, as usual, was licking the snow with a hoof, receiving concerned looks from her two friends.

Oh Izzy.

“Relax,” Zipp started to snicker, “I’ve done this plenty of times to get her attention when we were back in Zephyr Heights. She would be so glued to her phone that this was the only way to get her attention. Her face was priceless when it hit her right and she still falls for it every time.”

I think 'right' should be removed from the last sentence.

Pipp was still standing, a look of shock on her face as she looked down at the stallion who took the hit. Hitch had his front belly on the ground, hindlegs up at awkward angles. The snowball had taken a direct hit to Hitch on the side of his face.

Good going Zipp.

The snowball veered off its course and Sunny had little time to react. It hit her right in the face and exploded on impact. Sunny stood there, blinking snow from her eyes. Her face changed to one that Hitch recognised as ‘not being in the mood for this.’

This can't be good!

Sunny had already formed a snowball and it was now flying towards the two of them, but it seems her aim was also off.

Jeez what's with them and off throws all of a sudden?

“Ever heard of dodgeball?” Izzy smirked.

Uh oh!

Eventually, the barrage of snow stopped and Izzy was jumping up and down on the spot in a fit of giggles. Her friends, covered in white snow, looked at each other before a wicked idea formed amongst the group. as Izzy continued laughing her flank off, her friends formed many snowballs of their own. It was when Izzy stopped laughing that she noticed her friends’ plans.

As*

“Now then,” Hitch said, “Why don’t we all head into town and get something warm to eat and drink? I know this great place that serves freshly baked doughnuts and warm coffee and hot cocoa on the go.”

Remove the first 'and' in the second sentence and replace it with a comma.

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