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Fuggmann
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Saw this and thought it'd be an interesting read and really liked it. Could be more than a one shot and I'm sure that there are roots of becoming an actual story here. Keep up the good work and look forward to seeing more of this if possible!
Cheers mate!
Well. That was amazing. All it's missing is an epilogue with a jealous Spitfire when she sees what she's missing.
I wanna see a continuation, even without the smut, since you don't do that anymore
But whether or not you listen, I still really enjoyed it!
Honestly amazing story.
I can agree with the other people above that more would be great to see, but can understand if you don't want to do it.
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Agreed
oh fuck this is good
I would to see this continued even without the smut. It's an adorable little love story.
This story has great potential as a standalone romance story even if you don't want to write smut any more. Well done.
Dang, I typically stay away from these types of stories (Not much of a clop/smut type of reader or writer). But my goodness, the storytelling makes this tale so much better than I originally thought. The entire time I found myself smiling, simply enjoying the interactions between 'Mystic' and Soarin. I'd love to see a continuation simply involving the two relationship wise with or without smut. But judging by the comment at the very beginning, I'd lean more towards the latter.
Great story, I'm glad I took a chance and read it. The storytelling alone truly sells it for me, and the characters (especially Soarin) really feel solid. For a final smut story, I've gotta say you've left it on a beautiful high note in my opinion. But I'm also a sucker primarily for storytelling and characterization/interactions over solid clop/smut. Either way, fantastic job!
To continue the agreement train, this story was fantastic and lovely read; just really well written; that leaves me wanting more.
What I appreciate most about this story is that it doesn't end after the clop stuff. We get a little insight into how things may progress from here.
Sadly, from the sound of it, I don't think we'll be seeing anything more, which is a real shame. There is enough material here for some interesting story prompts.
For one, what if Spitfire gets jealous and starts to feel she made a mistake by turning Soarin away? How would she deal with Mysty?
And well likely being one of the weirdoes alluded to in the Author's Notes, I can't say that I'm not very curious about how Mysty would handle finding out she's with foal, if such a thing were to (hopefully) occur.
I usually don't read these Anon stories because they are absurdly silly in my mind, but... hot damn. This one does hit the feels in all the right ways, I'm kinda jealous with how well written this is. This definitely deserves a whole lot more likes and far fewer dislikes, but nowadays, people are trigger happy with the red button, aren't they? I'd love to see a continuation of this.
Is it natural for me to want more?
You were right this shit is weird
A lot of that going around, understandable. Hell even reading it gets repetitive. The premise is kind of odd, holds because magic, but it's still pretty feral sex, it hits the right buttons.
Then we get the juicy romance bit at the end instead, what a blue ball.
"Jeez Anon. Got a foal you're nursing?"
Is this perhaps, and hear me out, possible foreshadowing? I mean ya gottaaaaaa admit. It's pretty gooooooooood.
Honestly way better then I expected. I'd be happy to see this continue on into a full length story rather then a oneshot
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I can imagine Cadance request the spell from Twilight to help some lonely stallions in the Empire.
Loved it! Haven't actually come across transformation spells yet for anon, surprisingly, this one worked out great.
I really enjoyed it! Would love a sequal to such fine writing (who wouldn't haha)
Thanks for sharing :)
edit: And I just found the transformation sub. Time to dive in!
That's the spirit! Would be my mindset as well. I'm not gay, buuuut if I had a working vagina, well, things change now don't it?
well written story.
bonus chapter with anon and soarin trying to find a mare for a herd would be an awesome addition ^.~
This was great i hope there is a sequel to this story that expands the relationship between Soarin and Anon/Mystique that shows their developing relationship that ends with Anon/Mystique forgetting she was human and ends up pregnant with Soarin's foal and loving it
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Probably does mean you're bi under the right circumstances, those being having functional female parts.
This was great actually. I kinda wonder if Anon might fall in love with a mare as his human self, and she's cool with him being a mare sometime. Then the mare and Soarin be like, 'I'm cool with it if you are' in some kind of, psuedo heard fashion. And you know Anon's 'secret' relationship with Soarin won't last forever. I'd love to see more slice of life, I generally am not a fan of Soarin, But this was good, really good.
Good on ya Fuggmann
Came for the smut, stayed for the adorable bromance. Very well done!
Twilight, what did you do?
: "Well..."
: "..."
It was fully intentional, was it?
Because that's where he truly belongs.
Speaking of foals: Would having foals influence the transformation magic?
For all we know she might already carrying some.
Heh!
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Cute!
I would absolutely love to see a story about these two, even from the beginning that would be amazing!!!
The smut was great but with or without it the story was great...really want more
part 2 maybe????
This scratched all the itch and pressed all the right buttons for me. A simple clopfic are usually boring but there are times when a gem appears with real character development. Loved this and all your other series. I know this may be the last of the chapter but it doesn't stop me from hoping for more and yes I hope for more. Maybe one day. Maybe
Finish game of pones, thanks.
wonder why the image was removed?