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As of October 25th, 2022, I've retired from Fimfiction. I'll miss you.


All beings desire to be loved like no other, but what happens when that desire twists and warps your own grip on reality? When you want, but can never have?

(Anon in Equestria)

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Comments ( 38 )

Dayum, that ending was a little unexpected.

Well.... don't know what to say...um....have a like? :applejackunsure:

So Star is descended from Not-Cadence and Anon, well that's an interesting family tree even if it goes back a few centuries.

That was different, I really liked it mate, it was very well done. Have a like and fave. :pinkiesmile:

Short and dark! That ending was unexpected, though.

Wow. That was.. Unexpected. Well done. Like and fave from me.

oooooooo i get it now. well done

4131418 Can you explain it to me please? I'm kinda lost...

Huh. So I guess that happened. :applejackunsure:
Nice job. That was a good twist. :twilightsmile:

What a twisr...... GOD DAMN IT!

4131530 Well cadence became interested in Anon and made a clone so 'she' could be with him and Shining at the same time. However, she started watching anon and not-cadence, hundreds of years later she's jealous and obsessed even though anon died.

Oh my, what a twi-


Oh God, WHAT A TWIST! :raritydespair:

Ouch, poor Cadence. This theme always gets to me, beloved characters going truly insane. It hits me harder than their death most of the time.

But yeah, this was nice, if a bit depressing. I'm pretty sure I'm trying to say "good job", but right now I need to watch Rick Astley for a bit.

MotherFugger you magnificent bastard

Magnificent story.:twilightsmile:

always fun to mingle in someone else's despair and insanity. :pinkiecrazy: short but well done.

also, i wonder if Anon and NC actually ended up making a race of Anthro ponies

I literally just read this fic twenty times in the last fifteen minutes.:applejackconfused:

It's short but... words, i have none to describe this feel.:ajsleepy:

Wow this story was epic. Short but very entertaining. Thx to the guy in the comments who explained the ending. Had some trouble getting it.

4132482 star is obviously anon and not cadences foal right.

That is a very sad picture of Cadance...

I didn't really feel anything the entire story, but then I read that one sentence at the end and it all hit me like a fucking cinder block. Oh jesus.

Wow. That was clever, good author. Very clever. Well done. :moustache:

Comment posted by Synthetic Soul deleted Nov 9th, 2015

Very well done and not a common TV or movie plot line at all. You have really impressed me with this story and several of your others.

Great job.

The Monk

Well, that's not what I expected to happen. I don't even really like Cadence, but I still feel for her here.

I'm sad enough as it is, you glorious bastard.

I don't know about Shining, but there is no clone the mirror is showing her old memories.

There is no clone because there was never a clone what we're seeing through the mirror was Cadence old Ancient Memories she broke when Anon died so she made up a scenario where he didn't die he just got taken away with a clone.

He's saying that Cadence is crazy and made that story up to comfort herself.

So...what did I just read?

Hey, are you okay? You I don’t see anything on your blog and I noticed you disabled comments and ratings for a lot of your stories when you updated them as canceled instead of hiatus. Did you quit Fimfiction or something? If you did I just wanna day thanks for all the cool stuff you’ve written if you manage to see this. Also, did you change your name to retired, I don’t remember it being that?

Alright so I'll try to explain my interpretation of this story. Cadance couldn't let go of Anon's passing. She failed to move on so she fell into deep despair and longing. As for Star I think that he's Cadance's great grandchild since it was implied that Not-Cadance was pregnant and that happened hundreds of years ago.

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