Ponyille Postal Delivers

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Through wind and rain, down track and lane, Ponyville Postal delivers. No matter the weather, letters bring ponies together, and Ponyville Postal delivers.

Parcel Post faces his toughest assignment yet.

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TheScottishbroneyforlife

TheScottishbroneyforlife #1 · Feb 27th, 2021 · · ·

Good Chatter one I give it 10 out 11 And if yor interested I have some ideas for fanfics you mite like to write

NavelColt

NavelColt #2 · Feb 28th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Cute! Little build offs on moments often forgotten are some of the best fanfics to read, imo.

orp

orp #3 · Feb 28th, 2021 · 3 · ·

In the six years since Derpy Hooves had taken over as head mailmare, they had won the county prize for most efficient postal service four times.

In my headcanon, thanks to a certain friend, Derpy sometimes delivers letters before they were sent.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #4 · Feb 28th, 2021 · · ·

Never mess with the pony that handles your mail.

Adamastos

Adamastos #5 · May 4th, 2023 · · ·

Other than the use of the word "hellish" in a story that takes place in a universe without the abrahamic religions, it's decent short story. I'd give it a 5 out of 10.

Wild Stallion

Wild Stallion #6 · Oct 1st, 2023 · · ·

This was sheer brilliance.

Parcel Post's untold story of heroism in delivering Discord's invitation (and reducing the chaos therein) manages to be gripping largely because of your great setup of stakes.

The only minor gripe I have is that copying the scene itself might have been a better payoff since we could have seen how Parcel Post's efforts brought that scene about.

Other than that, this was brilliant.

I also like the implementation that not only is Muffins actually a hyper competent mailmare but that she's seen and suffered things in the line of duty to break the minds of most mortal ponies.

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