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Cardinal Dan Productions


I love to write, I love to read, and I love this community! If there's a story I want to read that doesn't exist yet, I'll write it myself.

Comments ( 46 )

I'm intrigued, but I'd like to know what fetish the story contains before reading.

Okay. I want a part 2.

Hey, I'd happily read a part 2! Loved the body description for Pinkie. Not many people are willing to put pubes on a girl. Personally, I'd like to get a bit more detail on Spike's body as well, but it's definitely fun seeing the young guy go full-stud. Well done.

I’ll be you’re wondering

*Bet.

Quite a nice short story, this. Well done!

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semi con perhaps? seems fairly tame to me...

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Actually, I planned to have some more kinky and/or anal scenes but ultimately left those out. If this story is well liked enough and I do make a Part 2, those bits might be put in.

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Ah, I see.

Edit: Will read later.

A month-and-a-half later I'm pregnant and your father

Let's be honest here, this is secretly a sequel to Slippery When Wet and I love it!

Brony Novice has read this story and is looking forward to part 2:moustache:

Yes! Definitely a part 2! Please!

This is interesting and considering that Slippery When Wet focused on Spike and Rarity while Sweet Echoes was Spike and Pinkie Pie...I'm sensing a series of Shower shorts for you.

Spike ends up either walking in on one of his friends taking a shower or hears them taking a shower and the girl involved invites him to join her and you know the rest.

Congratulations, I just saw this story now being on the feature page!!!

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The image is by an artist named TheBrokenCOG and this is from his patreon page here. The image is from last July

Part 2, Twilight walks in and her magic brings a new level of fun! :twilightsmile:

A continuation? I am interest.

Also, I echo what 10345214 said: include Twilight.

Wait your extending it?
I don't know if I'm able to give it one more like

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Yes, there’ll be a new chapter, likely tomorrow. I’m glad y’all like it.

So is this a thing now? Spike having sex with one of the mane 6 in the shower? Well, I'll all for this becoming a series.

Nice. Pinkie with big boobs is always nice to think about.

“I’ll never ware a bra again...”

Wear.

The Sex scene was even more glorious than chapter 1, I’m now ship Pinkie with Spike forever. :twilightsmile:

That was really nice. If you plan on making more like this I vote for AJ being next.

Very cute ending!

Brony Novice has read this chapter and liked it:moustache:

Pinkie always struck me as a girl/young woman who knows what she wants, and goes for it! Good for her, and great for Spike! Cool story, sexy and fun!:moustache::heart::pinkiehappy:

I hope you'll be writing more often

Hehe, well done with this.

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Thanks for the compliment. To be honest, this story was inspired 100% by the cover picture. Found the picture, loved it, and wrote a short story around it.

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To make this great story out of the image alone, is very impressive. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

>wipes sweat off brow meme
wow... I'm gonna read this again later.

A little short, but quite good. It gets right to the point. I was a bit confused in the beginning when Pinkie was described as nude and then later took off her towel, becoming actually nude. But I was really impressed with the breast play in this story. It’s not just a moment and then forgotten for the rest of the story like so many other fics — playing with her nice big titties was recurring, keeping some of the focus there for the entire fic. As a chest guy, I really appreciate that!

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