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*clears throat* Yes
Not sure if intentional but I feel this is way too relevant.
Nice work on the chapter look forward to what you come up with next
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nice man very nice what about an alraune for your next story
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Maybe lol but what's an alraune? If i can ask heh
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an alraune is a plant girl monster
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Alrighty than lol I'll have to think about that heh i got other stories XD though if you reallu reallu want it i do take commissions XD
This story needs a sequel. Maybe where Spike the were wolf is even ‘bigger’ then Cadence which leads to some rather crazy kinks.
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Maybe lol it was more of a fun one shot
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Well hey, at least you’ll consider it. That’s all I wanted.
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Very heh and please enjoy yourself good man and thanks for reading heh
Well... This was certainly, something.
Thank you for bringing me 10 minutes of entertainment.
This was hard to read, as the grammar is bad, some of the sentences don't make a lick of sense, and some of the sentences have a random comma one word ahead of a period. Also you used the wrong pronouns in certain sentences, like using he instead of she. It's an interesting story but the grammar mistakes, bad sentence structure , and over all flow of it makes it hard to enjoy.
Cadence stated she was in heat when the rendezvous with Spike happened...and Spike filled her up...
So i have to say, when we gonna have a couple of Wolf kids?? I really vibes on that anime about a lady that nurses a man back to health but realize he's a wolf spirit, and they fell in love and started a family. I hope though that Spike and Cadence both live....
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Lol it's all up to you
What if a mail girl makes personal deliveries to Spike or him working for the Rich family where he and Diamond starting their private relationship ft. Silver Spoon?
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Ill have to think about it
Spike's pizza job deserves only the best in music accompaniment!
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Lol you made my day XD
very good
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Your use of 'would' is very off putting in this story.
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Would it be better if i apologize for it or would it be. Too unsettling XD sorry my bad
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Its fine, its just I see too many writers using that style it gets annoying to me and just makes it look like they were lazy in their writing. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I'm just pointing it out.
Uh oh...
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I demand sequel
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Maybe when I've got time heh I've got some stuff in the work XD
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Yis
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while you wait for the future sequel of if it ever comes check out Succulent succubus and join my discord
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I second that. Maybe Spike would transform into were-direwolf or were-dragon? Or maybe one of them would accidentally add another into their pack?
Rough and Wild.
Most excellent.
10179994 I have to agree.
If the grammar and overall plot were a bit more polished, you'd have something really good. I do like the attempt you made here; I think it would've been interesting to see that lust build inside Cadance until she and Spike get into it with Cadance turning more and more bestial. Just my two cents.
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