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The ponies in this story are human's, but are still referred as their different pony form.

Why?

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because "lucifer morningstar" :D

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To make it easier for people to understand

Wonder how Spike's interactions with Luna would go?
Pretty interested on what happens next.

Are you going to finish this story

SpikexChrysalis? Lovely
Wonder is SpikexLuna/Nightmare Moon(and even Luna/Nightmare MoonxChrysalis too if you are into that?) can happen too? :0
Liked the interaction there with that whole dream.
Speaking of Nightmare Moon, since how it said she kicks in if Luna was in a demonic dream, wonder if that means if there is some connection? Like with Luna's inner darkness/dark powers and darker self is connected with demons and such.

Curious on what happens next

Certainly curious on what's going to happen next .
Like for Luna, Chrysalis, etc there :0

Curious on what happens next afterwards.
That's all I got at the moment :0

This is going to be fun to see for sure with whats coming up next :0

Nice to see Nightmare Moon is on board
Looks like up next would be Luna to join in \ovo/

Nice that Luna is on board.
Curious on what happens next :0

Any reason this Spike seems to be an outright spiteful jerk?

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That would be his demon side.

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Not really, like the show he has been mocked an abused, but when he became older and more controlling of his power's, that is when he became more hateful and angrier. That is the result of having Lucifer's blood in him.

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You don't think that he's still abused do you.

The recent seasons have been better to him. Not to mention Twilight genuinely cares about him.

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No! Not these day's no. If I were to write a story like that then I would do it before she became more caring.

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She's always cared in my opinion.

Spike was just a victim of slapstick circumstance. Random events his friends do care.

The writers are to blame.

That's my view anyways

Wow this is a good story.

Are you going to finish this story

Luna was sitting down in shock, Spike is very very, wealthy. Heck, he could buy Saddle Arabia, and Griffinstone and still have enough money. Luna couldn't believe it.

"If my sister finds out, then I don't know what she'll do with Spike." Luna said, in a whisper to herself.

What is THAT supposed to mean?! Is she jealous of Spike's MASSIVE WEALTH of over a Billion Coins or something?!

"Well, I have gotten to know Chrysalis well. She is very good in bed, not surprised our nephew took her, she is without a doubt a keeper!" Nightmare Moon said, making Luna become very red from her blushing.

"Well, it looks like you're investigation is closed detective~ Nightmare Moon said, in a seductive voice.

They had amazing sex, which even Luna had to admit was fantastic.

Welp, that Escalated Quickly!!! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:


Now Luna learn the Truth. How would Celestia, Twilight, Mane 5, and maybe Ember react to Spike being a POWERFUL Demon?

10419302 Well, there is also the way they always treat him. The ONLY people that wouldn't eventually get even a little fed up with it would people that are purely submissive

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Spike and Twilight can still make up, right?

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Depends, because demons are very unforgiving.

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3 things I'm crossing both fingers that you decide to do

1. Spike doesn't betray his family (earth not demon)

2. He forgives at least Twilight

3. less anti-angel comments from him.

I hope for resolution. As I always do, but its your decision.

Ponies having no respect for this thing called "privacy". Nothing new there

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I hope Spike remind them of it. And he is in the right age to do amazing Sex with his three girls.

Oof man i hope spike has enough stamina or strong enough bones for the mating or beating

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He'll be fine with the mating part. But the "beating" part sounds stupid to me. It's because: 1. Spike is a Demon, he is strong enough to defend himself and kick the Mane Six's assess.

2. Spike is no doormat and will not have just let them beat him up. Heck no to that.


3. Luna, Nightmare Moon, and Chrysalis WON'T let them beat their own love partner up. Plus, Celestia will join them too, since she is Spike's "Mama Bear".

Is this coming back someday?

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Yes, I'm just taking a small break. The next chapter should be up tomorrow actually!

And sorry for being a nosey pain in the but.

Nice chapter, I thought it was good to see there reaction to Spike.

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Nah, its okay I was planning on getting more chapters for this story.

This was a good chapter.

Sequel sequel sequel:pinkiegasp:

Sequel, please

Pretty nice read.
Hope there could be a sequel there.

Great story. I'd love a sequel that explains how Luna and Celestia being Celestial beings handle changes, and begins to slighty corrupted due to bearing half demon and half dragon children!

great ending.

"Open for you're master."
You’re = You are.
So the word you’re going far is “your”
Side-note: There’s a song on YouTube that I think you should watch, it is called. “your and you’re”👍

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