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Cardinal Dan Productions


I love to write, I love to read, and I love this community! If there's a story I want to read that doesn't exist yet, I'll write it myself.

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My favorite ship Sparity

Finally! More Sparity! Shame it's anthro, but I'll take what I can.

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This isn’t anthro, it’s human.

I'm pretty sure their little romp woke up some of their friends.

This was a great smut Sparity story & if everyone is curious about the cover art, click here to see more of the artist's work.

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From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia:

Anthropo-, a prefix meaning human,

I know the difference, of course, but well, either way, it's not pony (and dragon). Still, pretty good!

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Yes, but “Anthro” is short for “Anthropomorphic”, meaning something that is non-human, that has been given human-like characteristics, i.e. verbal speech, bipedal motion and/or the wearing of clothing. It typically refers to furries, but, technically speaking, under that definition, ponies themselves are, in fact, anthropomorphic. And, yes, I’m being pedantic, here, but I’m tired, and I can’t help it. :fluttershyouch:

That would be a really shitty towel.

Wonderful work

yet another adorable sparity story. I definitely approve

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Thank you for your approval. I hope you like my other works just as much.

Wow. I'm just gonna say it. THIS STORY IS GENIUS!!!

I wish I was as good as you. I mean 113 likes on the day it is published. I can’t help but wonder if there will be a sequel with Spike and one of the other girls. Maybe Fluttershy?

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Thanks a ton for the compliment. I’ve never thought of myself as that good of a writer, but that really means a lot. There might not be any more to this story or a sequel, but you might like a similar clopfic I wrote called Beach Bum that features Spike, Rainbow, and Rarity. Thanks again for your support of my story. :moustache:

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Yeah. I've heard of that one, I have it in my read laters.

Literally here for the coverart.

This was a great story. I hope we get to have a sequel with more shenanigans and more sparity

Who else you ship Spike with?

I would like to see a sequel to this story. I really enjoyed it 😊

Damn that was good. Everything about this from the grammar to the little details like the sunburn and of course the sex and teasing themselves were perfect. Very nice work.

Can't help but think how this could really expand out since Spike was checking them all out. The ways he comes across the others in similar states of undress on accident. Twilight excusing herself after claiming she was feeling too hot (and not mentioning ti was cause she'd been staring at Spike) and Spike finding her masturbating while moaning his name, of course. Waking up and noticing Shy missing and going out to see if he can find her out of concern, only to find her streaking (It's always the shy ones.) Finding one of the other's sunbathing naked (Let's face it; it's easy to see any of the other 3 doing this.) But yeah, potential... that has been running through my head most the day.

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Thank you for the support. It really means a lot. This work was not want to be a short one-off clopfic, but I did leave room for possible additions to continue the story. Outside duties constrain the time I’m allowed to work on projects like this, so new chapters will take time, but other short stories and clopfics are in the works.

In my opinion,this is a very well made clopfic and i enjoyed reading it. Is there going to be a sequel?

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Your avatar is a what if character invented by MasakoX of Team Four Star. The character is from the what if raditz turned good? Story and he had a child with launch they named her Ranch (like the dressing hehe)
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNSgpJTAeqwl1ILSHjUC84Hh1obBMtYxM
Theres a few hours of it there.

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Oh, I see. I'll have to check out that video sometime. I'm just a fan of Gine since she's still so popular despite only being in the latest movie so far.

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I feel dumb i see the gine in it... ranch has a head thing... also he does a what if gine went to earth
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNSgpJTAeqwmrvSd4LVTaOmuKl8JUej6f

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I'll look into it. Btw, you seen my Gine story on here?

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Shes gokus mom i think thats one thing. I think just there being a mother figure is enough for most.

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Yep. And so far, I'm the only one who's started a story where she becomes a protector of Equestria instead of Goku, Bardock, or Gohan.

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Trust me, I of all people know how that is. Still I doubt any of us would complain if a new chapter or a sequel popped up in time :raritywink:

I don't mean to rain on anyone's parade, I have neither upvoted nor downvoted this work, but I note that Spike is neither dog nor dragon, and that's an important detail to those who might wish to read this. You might want to include such a thing in your description. Have a nice day.

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I appreciate the criticism, but the story is tagged as ‘Human’. This, in addition to the use of hands throughout the story, implies that both sexual partners are human. I hope this helps.

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Yes, but one would expect Rarity to be human, that happens in canon. Spike, not so much. Details are important, they help people who wish to read your story find it, and enjoy it. Also, in the first few paragraphs, it's not quite apparent what race Spike is, as you've used words like hide to describe his skin.

It's very simple to add such a detail. You just put "This story takes place in an Equestria in which every race is just human." Puts it right there on the tin for people to see ahead of time.

Not meant as criticism, your story is fine, but again, telling people what to expect will help them.

this was great! I hope there's a sequel or a 2 ch

sever sunburn

Severe; he wasn't sliced open by the sunburn.

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inside it’s sheath.

its

Oh boi, Rarity might be preggers?


:D

Much hot, very upvote. :moustache:

Two things tho:
1: it’s “surely,” not “surly.” And
2: are we gonna ignore Spike going inside Rarity, never mind cumming inside her, after she specifically told him not to?

I think Rarity was referencing her rear not being entered by Spike. She didn't say no when he slid inside her. She even opened her legs more for him.

I’ll be honest, the original cover art was better.

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I completely agree with you.

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