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Rainbow takes Rarity on a short holiday to try and get away from everything.
But she knows there are some things you can't leave behind.
Winner of the Black Thursday contest for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Group.
This was originally written in an hour. This version has received some slight refinement. A big thanks to all who preread in the contest.
CW: Themes/suggestions of mental illness, self-harm and suicide
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Just as haunting as the first read. Great stuff, Seer.
Haunting and well crafted as usual. I've been enjoying these shorts quite a bit.
This is such a beautiful and haunting story, and your writing truly shines here. I love this story for more than all of that though, I love it because I have been Rarity and I have been Rainbow Dash and I have been both at the same time. You really capture how overwhelming depression can be, both for the people who suffer from it and the people who are close to them.
holy fuck seer
This is phenomenal. It's more than exactly what it needed to be; simply neat and grammatical writing. It's genuine, delightfully purple-y, and much, much more.
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Thank you all sincerely for the lovely comments, I really appreciate them
This is beautiful and terrifying at the same time. You have quite a skill. Well done.
Hey there! This was reviewed here. Thanks for picking me as a reviewer and I hope you find what I had to say helpful!
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Oh wow! Thank you very much for the lovely reading I really appreciate it! You did an amazing job with this, as did the VA for Rarity & Heartfire, the artist who made the excellent thumbnail, and the musicians who provided the soundtrack! I really can't express how happy I am with this! :D
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You're welcome but I actually didn't do this reading, it was done by TheLostNarrator and her wife Magpiepony. ^_^
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Ohh my apologies I thought this fimfic account was the one associated with the reader. That's my bad I'm not too well informed on the different readers active at the moment haha :P Now I see your youtube channel I can see you're the reader who did a rendition of my friend Flashgen's Fleeting Light in the Darkness piece! It's an amazing fic and I thought reading was great!
Thank you for letting me know about the reading! I'll make sure to comment on the video to pass on my thanks to her and her wife!
A well-written story, but I can't shake this feeling I'm missing something in it. Some key piece that would allow me to truly "get" it.
Well done :) just came from losts reading
Welp, time for me to go cry, but seriously this story is very freaking sad but so good, good job!