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Fluttercheer


Admin and official Story Scavenger of the Cutie Mark(ed) Crusaders group. If you need help with sorting a story into the group folders, send me a message! Once Quest writer for "Legends of Equestria".

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Rainbow Dash was only half-serious when she said she could become Princess Luna's successor as dreamwalker.
But when the Princess of the Night knocks on her door after sunset, just a few days after King Sombra's mysterious return, Rainbow Dash finds out that the Princess is very serious about it.
She is here for Rainbow Dash's training.


The cover picture belongs to kwhittski on Deviantart.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 26 )

Oh! An interesting premise and a lovely start. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

You've got my attention. Looking forward to where this goes!

I like your confidence and nice Work!

Frankly, i am a bit unsure about that whole Retirement Thing. Day and Night tasks would be too much for Twilight to handle on her own. Plus Luna said r&r, and They didn't a Official Statement to the other Citizens of equestria, so i Hope we see them more in Season 9

I was wondering how long it would take for someone to write a story about that. I mean, that line uttered by Rainbow in the season premiere was basically a fanfic prompt.

I'm glad to see you're treating the premise with the seriousness it deserves, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

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Me too. The ideas for it are flooding in and I have a very exciting plot for it planned. This is my biggest project since the completion of two previous fics of mine that I finished two years ago, "Princess Flurry Heart, Destroyer of Worlds!" and "Aunt Millie", and I can't describe how relieved I am that I can finally write through another big multi-chapter fic again.
I missed doing this during the last two years that weren't kind to me in that regards.
Thanks for the praise! I'll keep delivering with this!

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Thanks!

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I like my confidence, too, especially because there hasn't been a whole lot of confidence in my writing in the last two years. Starting this story feels like writing "Princess Flurry Heart, Destroyer of Worlds!" and "Aunt Millie" again. I have a very good feeling about this.
And seeing you join this ride here makes me think on the times when you regularly commented on my two hit stories up there and I am happy that you are reading this story. This puts me right back into 2016 and early 2017 and this will give me another confidence boost,

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You name it and I'm surprised no one beat me to it. I would have thought that such an opportunity for a fic that not only puts a Mane Six member into a new situation, but also has a high chance of writing a lot for Luna, would be taken in a matter of days after the season opener aired.

I'm glad to see you're treating the premise with the seriousness it deserves

It could have easily been a short-lived comedy fic or a quick clop one-shot that someone decides to write after hearing this sentence. But there is a lot more to get out of this opportunity and I'll do my best to use it to its full potential. Dreamwalking is something epic, so it deserves an epic story.
Thanks for joining the reader squad here, more chapters will come soon!

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Nyronus and I got to chatting about this idea pretty much as soon as the episode dropped, and his fic on the same premise went up tonight. That one's more light-hearted than this appears to be, but it's cool to see such divergent takes. Best of luck!

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I have just noticed this story on the front page. It's good to see that there are more authors who use the idea!

I was actually hoping somebody would do something like this, so let's see how this goes. :twilightsmile:

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Thank and thank you for the fave! :twilightsmile: Chapter 2 will be here tomorrow!

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Personally, I think Celestia and Luna will continue to do things like move the sun and moon even after retiring, because that is what their special talents are. They just won't have to worry about all the governing duties as princesses going on top of it.

But that said, it would still be interesting to see how the Mane 6 would handle those same duties if turned over to them. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah. The fact Luna saw it as r&r and There was no Official Statement to the other Citizens of equestria, i can't Imagine they're just gone like that

Nice Work! Must not be easy for Luna to be reminded of her past. By the Cover, i'd say Rainbow Looks Good as alicorn.

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It means I should wait for more chapters before judging this story.

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Must not be easy for Luna to be reminded of her past.

The past is not always a pleasant thing to think about. Especially not if discoveries of old things bring back certain old memories.

By the Cover, i'd say Rainbow Looks Good as alicorn.

It's a good picture, albeit a little misleading. Rainbow Dash will not become an alicorn in this story.

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I see, makes it the more interesting how she uses that as Pegasus.

And sorry about the PMs lately, just thought you might be interested.

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I hope you will enjoy it then once you decide to read it.

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I did read it. But I don’t want to judge a story like this based on just two chapters.

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I see. I got confused by your comment, because the story is in your Read Later list.

This won't hurt -- I have had doctors promise me that in the past and they were all liars. You don't say "This won't hurt" for pleasant procedures.

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I had doctors telling me that who lied and doctors who told me that it might hurt now. If your doctor lies to you about it, I say it's time to find a different one.
Will it hurt Rainbow Dash? You'll have to wait and see.

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