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Smashology


Welcome to my world, my mind and my own Wonderland. Writer, Analyst, Critic, Movie Buff, Gamer, Researcher, that's who I am.

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First entry of my Literary Trilogy.

My name is Ditzy Doo but everypony calls me Derpy. My name is Derpy Hooves and this is my family. My name is Derpy Hooves and I miss them so much. My name is Derpy Hooves and I fear they forget me.

Inspired by 'The Perks of Being a Wallflower' and 'The Lovely Bones.'

Thanks to Night_Shadow12 for the editing. You're the real hero here!

For Vanilla Mocha, my first follower.

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Chboskian facts:

-Writing this story was the perfect idea for bringing Derpy and Amethyst Star to a middle point, since most stories have Derpy and Doctor or Derpy and Dinky (plus, since Amy has little personality that means you can write everything you want with her).
-The "Heaven Scene" was particularly one of the hardest scenes I've ever written: it had Luna playing St. Peter's role, a line of ponies, the environment full of clouds and even Chrysalis as the Devil. The result was too obvious and too comical that everything was dropped, rewritten or cut.

Sorry if I had to do the curious facts this way. Everything was a coincidence, it wasn't planned (if someone's wondering: this story was written back in November 2015). As always like, share and comment. Constructive criticism is accepted.

*Pre-Reading*

Wow! :pinkiegasp: This was written for me?! Thank you so much, I feel very honored! :pinkiehappy: :yay: It means so much have someone write me a story. Thank you once again! This really made my day. :heart::derpytongue2:

*Post Reading*

W-wow... I am crying. This was so touching. :pinkiesad2: I have no words... I have never read anything like this before. Very good job, Smashology! :pinkiesad2:

Nice story:yay: why have some people to die when they're still so young. I saw both pictures on Diviantart once, very good pictures and story overall. Poor Dinky, her mother died, it's always difficult to lose someone who is so close and grow up with only one parent:pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

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