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Chemtest


What just happened? That’s the question.

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For all to long the false Empire Order has ruled over Inamorta, bringing naught but chaos in it’s wake. When Order causes this disorder, The Chaos Empire strikes. Now, Order fights a two front war as we rise up. We must unite if we are to take out Order! And tonight, we march!

For we are the Archidons, with bows so accurately piercing they shall fall before they get a chance to stand!

For we are the Swordwrath, swords so sharp limbs will sever at mere sight!

For we are the Speartons, born to die, but not before them!

For we are the Magikill, and today we summon Unity!

And we march, to take back our land, to push out the Chaos invaders, and to bring glory to our Empires!

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Where apparently is this timeline? Because Medusa had her head chopped off in the end of the game and the rebels have agreed to share inamorta with Order. Atreyos, I believe was in the Order empire because the thing with Stick war (mobile version) had Atreyos and all his friends (Most of his friends anyway. Wizard sacrificed himself) were battling with zombies. If this was in Stick war 1, then Medusa couldn't have joined in because she was observing the rebels and Order. That's all I have to say. If I am wrong then correct me

What is this a crossover with?

9236148
This would be near the beginning of 2, with the rebel’s riseing up against Order and Chaos being a bit ahead of schedule.

Yay, a Stick wars story! I love the game series :pinkiehappy:

9236471
If this timeline is the near beginning of the second stick wars then shouldn't there be a Shadow wrath or a Meric then in the Rebel's army? Unless the technology is still not there yet. Which is not possible since this is the near beginning of Stick War 2 because of parts of the game's description about the Shadow wrath and the Merics. Although, a meeting with Medusa is quite possible. I don't really see why Medusa needs any help or want help from the Rebels.

Oh well... that interesting
And i was looking around to see if someone had written something about stickmen so thats a bonus

9236581
This is near the start of the second game, meaning the intro scene. In the scene, the rebels march off, that is where this begins. Medusa didn’t want any help, so she sent them away to the other world to be taken care of later.

9237145
Okay, yeah I guess that makes sense. Thank you for the info.

9237386
To be fair, I didn’t even think about that from the start. So. I guess you helped me come up with more lore.

Shit needs to happen to both Twilight and Rainbow.

9241690
Were they really the bad guys in this situation? I mean, Twilight just broke up a fight.

9241749 I admit that Twilight deserves a pass. As for Rainbow, yes. While Atreyos could have talked to Pinke a bit softer concerning her party cannon, Rainbow flew off the handle. I don't really hold Rainbow in high regard, and her jumping in like that, especially with the threat of violence/bodily harm, to me makes come off as some bully. Like "Do as I say, or I beat you up." Then again, the Speartons appear to be based off of the Spartans, and rereading the section...

9242072
I tried to design this section so that there is no right and wrong side. Pinkie pointed a weapon at a bunch of men prepared for war. Rainbow just wanted to stand up for her friend unlike she did with Gilda (which will be revealed later). Atreyos was harsh on Pinkie, in their standards because he still treats the world like Inamorta where the words he says would be much more a compliment rather than threat. And Harry had his hand in this situation indirectly (which will be covered later).

I have the faint feeling that this is (the guy leaving) is going to bite Ateyos in the ass.

I pick it up, choaking it, and look it in it’s blue eyes, “You have made a terrible mistake. Better prepare to start talking. I will find Harry, one way or another, and you are going to have a bad time.”

Prepare to get

hmm first of it's kind, but loved the game series and still love stickmen!

9254489 The guy's general insubordination. It just gives off that feeling.

Here in America, we call it a "Tactical Baptism."

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i know
i've seen this before guy gets kicked out instead of killed, becomes angry and then becomes the archnemesis

Did.... did they just shove the whole statue in a bag? Like the whole twenty foot statue made of stone? Who needs magikill get those magical miners to fight with magic bags!

Holy crap. Is that how the two games are connected? I played 2 years ago. Beat the mobile version just this year. If that's how the stories match up........damn.........

9241690
They are an innocent bunch. Blame Celly.

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9242437
Well, your both right from different perspectives. Chem however, is a bit more understanding of a situation such as this. See, what you don't really understand, is the people of Inamorta are used to insults, and often times find them to be more complementary than anything. That being said, this is ponyland. The land of grown children and rainbow beams of friendship. They don't do insults well. I, once again, blame Celly. If you take a solid look at this chapter, you would see the widely accepted headcanon history. They were less ponies and more like the Inamortan people. Warriors. But They aren't any longer. Thus, insults are taken as they were in the previous chapter. Think about it. It honestly makes sense.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Also, how did I know Harry was his father?

I remember playing this game back in high school.

Heh, I remember playing the 1st game, never thought I’d see a fanfic of it, nice!

I hope Celestia understands that they came from a world of death.

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not just death but, war, no morals, and lots of racism (cause you know the Brutus guy from a previous chapter)

God, I almost forgot that game. Played the shit out of it in my younger days. I'll be watching this one.

9690572
Well, just a little hint, this story is also crossing over with another one of my stories. So, if you want to understand the main villain, he comes from Rise of a Raven and The Reaper.

9690585 I'll see about looking at those too, then. Always did enjoy a good bit o' villainy. :rainbowwild:

*is new to your stories*
*and this fic is the first one I've read from you other than the I Am The Villain, and I Have a Rock*

The rotting alicorn smiles, “I, my dear, am King Blueblood. King of the Enclave, Rightful King of Equestria, Leader of the Revolution, Destroyer of Equis, Servent to Zalgo, and Element of Greed.” His necklace’s glow starts to get brighter, “You are my servant, and your Hive is my army.”

"I hAvE sEvErAl QuEsTiOnS"

Servent to Zalgo

the only Zalgo I know is the leader of the demons (or whatever the F:yay:k the "enemy" are) in that one comic I watched a dub of for creepypastas with a little girl named Lazari that is the daughter of Zalgo

Hail Zalgo, destroyer of reality!

9690572
Yaaaas. I fricken love that game!

9690953
T͇o̫̤̹̗͓̝͟ͅ ̫̯̲̣͍i̩̥͍͖͓͠n̰͚̦ͅͅv͇͈͓͓ọ̪̫̳̰̞͕k̵̺̹͈e̝̜ ̨̘̦̙͖͓ṱ̥͍͎h̯̘̖̬̖̣̝́ḙ͓̠̲̱ ͉͉ḫ̴̞i̷̲̼v̯͓e̮̼̙̖͚̜-̡̺̝̫̳̱̗m̰̀i̢n̵̳̩̼d̦ ̞͈̣͎̟r̘̝̘̬͇̣̳̀e͉͙̻̹͙̤̳͘p͔̹͈̪͖̟͢ͅr͚̣͎̥̭͕e̢̖̮̯̫̟̦s̘̞̪̜ḛ̷̟̦̤̺ͅn̨̜̦̬̗͎ti͔͈͇̲͜n͈͓̜̙̹̖̟g͇͞ ̞̘̺͚c̬̣̗͎͚̜̮h̸͚̹͚͓̯̭a̞̳̤o̫͎̣̰͙͎s͉.̶̙͎̻̹̻ͅ
̞̭̱I̢̤̮̮̙̬͉̬n̬ͅv̻o͉̤͔̜̺͜k̩͢i̼̥n̻͖̥͈g̤̥̮̪̬͠ ͘t̲h̸̗̘̦̞͈̰e̠ ̥͎͝f̤͙̼̦e͔̘̦̹͚͞e̹̩̬̯̥͕̲ḻ̹i̺͈͉̠̯̮͈n̤̮͔͠g̨̲̺̩̹̫͓ ̮̱ͅo͈̙f͙ ̦̬ćh̶̤a̮̳̰̫̻͘ͅos̖̱̹.̟ͅ
W̛̪̭i̠͔̙͉̞ţ̦̺̯̠͔h̶̼ ̀o̠͈͞u̴̟͙̥͉̝͔͉ț ̤̭͕̼͚ͅo҉̭̻̯ŕd̢̞̞̪̯̣̝̬er̟̻͍͈͇͙.
̗T̷͕̝ͅh̗̟͙̘͔̞̩e̟̹͔̬ ̵͍̺̩̼̜͎̫Ņ̘̭̗̙̳e͏̻̻̭̮̮̤̞z̧̖̺͈͍͉p̛̦̯e͉̹̘̖̦͈͟r͚̜̜d̪̞i҉a̜̜̰ͅn̙̬̙̞͔̗͝ ̵̣̖͍͍͕̯͓h̗͞iv͕̦͉̭e̶̟͕ͅ-̛̰̥͔̙m̨̲͎͕͇̰i̟ͅn̕d̥̝͜ ̀ǫ̘͇̱͇̘ͅf̥͚͎̣ ͎̣͈c͡h̯̹͇̼a̳̱̰͎o̗̻̥̠̙̲s͞ͅ.̮̙̱͚͜ Z̥̳a̪̗̺̲lǵ͚ͅo̥̫̘̠̰.̡̥̦̩
͕̺̜H͙̮̹̭͈͡e̪̹̳ ̳̬̲̼͓w̪̝͚̭h͔͍͍͇̕ͅo̴̠̫̖ ̣̠Wa̡͎̳͈i̯̱t̲̩͖̗s͚̫͈̲̟̝ ̻̖B̹͔͈ͅe̟̞̥̞͉h͓ͅi̤͈̪̦̩͡n̴̠̥͉̩͇̻d̯͖̪̪̩̪ͅ ̜͎͉͕͙͖͞Ṯ̨̜̗͙̞h͔̫͝e̜͇̙̬̳ ̥Ẉ̖̙̳͚aͅl͔͎̘͜l҉̯̬̲̗͔͍̤.̢̜͈͕ͅ
͍Z̞̠A̬̳̻L͕͈̞͜G̦̖̝͢O! ̤̗͚̯̦̲̤͠

The rotting alicorn smiles, “I, my dear, am King Blueblood. King of the Enclave,

*MIND GLASS BREAK SOUND*




I'M GONNA FUCKING KILL THE BASTARD WHO MADE BLUEBALLS A FUCKING ALICORN AND SHIT ON THE FUCKING REMAINS OF THE FUCK WIT WHO DID THAT!?!?!?!? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!?!?!?!?!?!?

9691663
Well, it was himself, so go ahead.

Bring salvation not just for ponies, but to everyrace.

What is this a crossover of?

Dang. Very short chapters.

Uh, woah, I am sorry, but innocent does not exactly describe any changeling in this situation. Yeah, he did some bad stuff that is frowned upon, but what he is trying to prevent is much worse. And honestly? He is right. Twi is being a soft idiot. No, torture isn't right, but what would she do if something happened to, say, Spike? Would she sit idly thinking of rights and wrongs? Or would she do something about it?

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