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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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I wondered how long it was going to be before this was made.

Comment posted by DragonPony deleted Sep 4th, 2018

I appreciate your detailed content warnings.

When reading "Itโ€™s a Breeze" I thought that breezies would he getting belly poped in the first chapter, surprisingly not a lot of breezy porn out there and I know that if anyone could make creatures so small that you could wear them as a condom sexy it would be Headless Rainbow.
Now that I've said this I wouldn't be surprised if you're next fic has a box of used up breezies next to someponies bed.

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Honesty is one of my few good traits :ajsmug:

9152220
The idea has crossed my mind. A different bad ending where those stupid little things got the deaths they deserve could be pretty interesting. Maybe have one raped by bees (however that works), one used as a condom, one suffocated in Fluttershy's cunt, etc.
Meanwhile her friends stand by shrugging "Oh well, she's the expert, she must know what she's doing!"

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So in your mind would they stretch like in a sparrow comic or would they just burst and she would need to put multiple on?

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Bursting and putting more on without taking the first off would be pretty gross and interesting.

9152831
True but they're so small that they would have to stretch at least a little bit before that.

I might not be a big fan of Rape and Vore, but I can surprisingly read it.

Good story though.

I have a feeling that Calestia (Spike)and Cadence (Rainbow Dash)and Luna (Gilda)all have a victim each :pinkiecrazy:. A good dosage of Alicorn vengeance.

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Aw, what a nice story. The happy new couple are clearly perfect for each other, they saved the poor enslaved child, and together they gave the horrible monster exactly what she deserved.

How much longer until the not dark version?
Oops nevermind, I thought you wrote the original initially, didnโ€™t read the full description.

An excellent piece!

Iโ€™ve read this so many times. I think I can say that this is my favourite story youโ€™ve written.

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I have a lot of things I'm working on but would like to eventually.

Ahem. A cleaner version would been... Nice

9487902
Well there is the erotic non-violent version mentioned in the description, but I don't see how I could make a clean version of this. There wouldn't be a whole lot to it.

I just wish this one was more concise (short). Or at least some kind of turn of events. Don't get me wrong, I love sick shit. But 10,000 words (or at least, the better half of this chapter) of bloody, necrophilic rape gets old pretty quickly. If I had a conscience or a soul, this might have gotten a reaction out of me. But since I have neither of these things, reading this was pretty boring. Adding some kind of climactic blood bath or turning of tables might have made me more interested. Unless the rape-fetish stuff is just your thing? Would you be going against your brand?

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Some of my stories are long-winded and not for everyone, while some are a bit more concise. There are people that like both I suppose.

โ€œStop it!โ€ Spike's cry was muffled beneath Gilda. โ€œRainbow I've killed Gilda, you can stop!โ€

LOL

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You shouldn't laugh at Spike killing people, only at people killing Spike

โ€œGood,โ€ said Gilda. โ€œBecause after we rest, there's other ponies in Ponyville we should pay visits. I want to get my murder on with that bitch Pinkie and nom that yellow pegaslut too.โ€

No. Not Fluttershy. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I managed to survive reading this. It's going to be favorited

Hey there, you've written a good story. I really like the concept of violent and carnivorous griffons, and you delivered just that. I enjoyed the first part very much, and I enjoyed the Twilight part too, until the spot where they call for the death of all Princesses and defile Twilight's body, that I did not enjoy. So here are my criticisms.

Don't shit where you eat. I think you tried to bring in all of the fetishes together, and you've lost the plot for what it actually means to be a carnivore. Spike's, Rainbow's, and even Gilda's hatred for ponies as you made it out to be by the end was over the top. Griffons are also able to be loyal and caring to some extent, just like lions, tigers and all predators in the wild are, I think you portraying them as total egomaniacs was bit too much. Furthermore, I think the part where Twilight was pressured to not teleport away(or teleport the Griffons away) was kind of forced. I think there were more creative ways to make something like an accidental pony death and being eaten happen. Oh, and Twilight being able to think rationally as she was ripped apart was kind of silly. I can't imagine having any internal monologue when I am in absolute agony as my limbs are ripped and bones crushed.

Thanks for the story! :twilightsheepish:

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Glad you mostly liked it. It wasn't really meant to have much of a plot though so the characters just use porn logic.

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