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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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Is telling people to kill themselves against the rules of this site?

11650446
I don't know. It's probably against human decency to find the death of a real person more acceptable than the death of a fictional one though. Funny how monsters like you prioritize their waifus over real people.:rainbowhuh:

11650446
Actually yes, in the rules 'No Personal Attacks' is the very first rule. The rules can be found in the site settings area below FAQ's and above the writing guides.

Ah, my daily dose of horrific stuff on the internet. I'm glad to have you back.

A very dark take on Cadance's personality and the fact that Shining may have been closer to a slave than a husband. She can cheat but she'll kill any lover he's had, even family.

Well written but not quite my cup of cest. I won't downvote it but I can't bring myself to upvote it either.

11650499
I've been back for a bit probably. :rainbowdetermined2:

11650507
That's fine, plenty of people that didn't even read it will downvote it to make up for you :rainbowdetermined2:

11650507
See, I look at it as a very healthy marriage that is able to overcome any hurdle through communication and cooperation. Most wives would demand a divorce if they found out their husband was cheating with family behind their back, but Cadance is able to calmly work through the problem with Shining and find a solution that they can both enjoy. Notice that she also practices active listening during Shining's attempt to make up for his mistake, picking up on Twilight mentioning him doing their mom before he kills her. And does Cadance react with rage or anger? No. She simply communicates the next steps that they need to partake together in order to maintain their marriage.

No wonder she's the Princess of Love. All ponies should strive to follow her example.

11650531
Did we read the same story? Cadence literally says that Shining is her property. That's not exactly a healthy marriage. Unless your whole post is sarcasm and in that case well done.

shiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeet

Seems relatively safe to me! :twilightsmile:

Ohhhhh- so dark! I can't believe I'm asking, but will there be a sequel?

This realy isn't my cup of tea as the expression goes, but I do like to read outside of my comfort zone from time to time, you know, just to try and understand what it is that makes the people who genuinely enjoy this sorta thing tick, and I constantly find myself drawn towards your work. And I'd like to take this moment to thank you for all the hard work you put into this.

I've heard it said 'the brighter the light, the darker the shadow', far too often we are blinded by a magical world filled to the brim with rainbows, butterflies and sunshine and we forget that darkness still exists, even if we wish that it didn't. and even if we turn our backs to it and close our eyes tightly and pretend that it doesn't exist, it is still there and it is very much real.

Thank you for reminding me.

I know probably no one cares and certainly not the Autor but...: "This was by far the worst and disgusting story I have ever read. I want my uselessly wasted minutes reading that back and am now going to soak my brain and eyes in bleach."

There is a limit I can tolerate and it has been exceeded damn high
Thanks for nothing!:fluttershbad:

11650692
I'm sure she cares, keeping a record of the most inventive invective flung at her. :derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy:

I started wandering right from the start:is Shining a changeling or is Cadence forcing him to do it?So in a way, I'm glad I was right :ajsmug:
As a side note:I remember reading a story by LewdChapter involving a cheating SweetieBelle getting killed by Spike because Rarity told him to do so.Did you read it too or is it just a coincidence that the stories are so similar?

11650646
Relatively yes. I don't see why not:rainbowdetermined2:

11650673
I don't have plans for a sequel short of being commissioned for one. I just saw the related image and thought that it'd make a great short story. I do have a few other dark ideas involving the Sparkle family though so don't know if I'll get around to them or not.

11650692
It's sad to see someone that can't keep themselves from reading a story they'll hate even though it is super-clearly marked as something they wouldn't like. Like... do they just see any story and read it by reflex? Or are they masochist and intentionally read things they won't like? That must be difficult. :rainbowhuh:

11650696
It's been a long time since I got any insults I'd consider inventive. There are only so many you get from the type of person that would stop and comment on something clearly marked as not for them.

11650780
I haven't but wish I did now that you talk about it. I got this idea from the image mentioned in the description, when looking at it and imagining why Shining would just suddenly up and decide to snuff Twilight during a regular session, and that's all I could come up with.

11650696
Well I never intended to specially insult the autor, its just that I myself am a very unstable person with a huge problem. I knew right from the start that this story would not go kind on my fav. hors (Twilight). Nevertheless I read it to the end while perfectly knowing it would give me terrible thoughts for weeks, no chance to sleep tonight and much much more. Thats why I wrote this comment. Its not an intended insult against another but my own anger for my inability to control myself to not read stuff like that, knowing it isnt good for my mental health.:fluttercry:

I even do the same thing as the person that wrote this story. Just look at what I have wrote, its the same thing if maybe a “little” less cruel from my point of view.

11650963
First of all, hope you know what I really meant with my comment (I think you did as you already said it in your reply) - sorry for writing.

Now to the thing you asked. Yes, the short version is exactly what you thought of in your comment. I see a story; read the warning; see that I would never like it (especically if Twilight is hurt in any way); look at it a second time; read it; get sometimes a mental breakdown while reading or after, sleepless nights and terrible day-night dreams about it; hate myself for again not being able to control myself in not reading it; do it the very next time just like that when I see a story, picture, or the like just like that.

I´m pretty f up in my mind and my coping echanism is just like yours. To write stories about my most distrubing thoughts because it gives me an inner peace. Most times I read it by reflex and in some cases (and one very specific pony I am an masochist.) It truly gives me satisfaction seeing her suffer the worst things that could ever happen to her and I might even like me for...well liking and doing it.

11651412
Liking a character doesn't rule out wanting to see them in extreme fiction. Are you sure the issue isn't that you WANT to read it but then feel guilty afterward?

11651432
Hm maybe... don't exactly know. Yes I do like to see Twi in extreme fiction, but never in some where she is hurt or submissive. The other way around...oh hell yes!:rainbowwild:

And yes I do hate myself for my lack of control and punish me to some extend for it. (I don't hurt myself physically but things like: "No Lunch for you today or not watching a movie and instead going to bed.") Things like that. Things I think are not too extreme.

11651495
Punishing yourself for what other people tell you that you shouldn't like is not healthy. Reading fiction is not a sin and any therapist worth their salt (like mine) will tell you that there's nothing wrong with stories like this.

Didnt expect Cadence to be behind it but that perfectly explained why Shining was so upset that Twilight said that. I was pushing past it but like “What was wrong w that??” And once Cadence repeated that I grinned so hard like AWW SHIT :trollestia:

11657467
Yes Mommy is next, though sadly I have no plans to actually write it unless someone commissions. Too many other ideas.:rainbowdetermined2:

This was so amazing it makes me feel so alive to feel those fun moments of unfairness, betrayal, and death. I didn't realize how bad my death/betrayal blue balls were until I read this. I feel so refreshed. Thank you!

The only thing I thought might happen that didn't happen was when I read watersports I thought he would pee on her corpse afterward. But enhanced necro realism is an even more appropriate use of watersports. So the story delivered exceptionally on the description

11669517
I'm glad I cured your betrayal blue balls. That can get really expensive to fix if it progresses unchecked.

I just came back to this site after years away, what did i just read 💀

This is very odd but whatever floats your boat I guess
two question
Is there a sequel?
This isn’t really a question but
What is they kept twilights body and used it as a sex toy?

11805547
I didn't plan a sequel, but if I did it'd probably be her making him kill his mother too. I didn't think about keeping the body in this one as I have others, but it's certainly a thing.

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