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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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Okay, that description made me smile at how ludicrous this is. it almost made me read it.

D48
D48 #2 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · 1 ·

Oh god, the porn logic in this is brilliant. Why worry about betrayal? Snuff because horny, and damn the consequences. :rainbowlaugh:

Beyond that the content is very well written as always, although I think you could have made it even better by having some fun with the crowd's reactions in the "conversation" breaks and taking advantage of the few seconds of life a severed head has, especially with Cadence. Also, you mostly forgot the postmortem bowel/bladder releases which is extra strange considering how things played out with Celestia's bladder, although I can understand how diving into that in any detail could slow the pacing down too much.

11633560
It's a commission so I wrote it specifically with what they wanted to see within the word count. Those are all nice ideas though.

11633533
And to think there are people that take these stories seriously enough to get angry at me.:rainbowhuh:

D48

11633568
The commissioner put down the money, the commissioner gets the requested product. No one sensible can argue with that, although I'm sure some clown will be along soon enough to try. :facehoof:

11633569
And we get to laugh at their idiocy.

Think you can do a Cock vore version of this?

11633809
I have no qualms with cock vore, but as this was a commission, that'd probably need to be one too.

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11633575

Yeah, but maybe draw some lines...

11699423
Why? So people that it isn't even targeted at will feel better about people liking things they don't like? I don't know maybe I'm misunderstanding what you mean by lines.

11699653
More like, rather than force yourself to write stuff you're not okay with for the paycheck, make it clear what you are — or are not — willing to write, and if it's not what they want to see, that's on them.

11699824
But I'm okay with writing it. I'm okay with most anything happening in fiction, even things I'd be very against happening irl. If there's one thing I can do its distinguish fiction from reality.

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