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LewdChapter


Remember. We're the good guys | The Death Writer | Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/lewdchapter

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Mmm, delicious.

It'd have been very insidious if she'd been planting those dreams in her sister long enough to warp her psyche enough to want it.

We seriously need more control on this site....

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You got that right, though I don't think Celestia would stay dead for long, she is immortal so if there was a way to take that way then she will heal from that and get back up and back to work as Princess of the Sun.

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Eyup. It goes too far...

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People wouldn't write these things if other people didn't want to read them.

If you don't want to read them, peace out and read something more your speed

9534076
Nah, Celestia's dead. Almost as dead as I feel inside every day.

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[Raises his hoofs] Okay...

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Well then what about the Sun, who is going to raise and lower the sun in Equestria then with Celestia dead, I still think she will just heal from this.

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That's a cop out. Especially when you know it will disturb a public.

That's like forcing a naked man into an all female festival. He wasn't invited and there may be some thirsty gals there and it was never planned, but overall it all comes down to what the man wanted to do.

Which leaves an even worse taste in your mouth after realizing that. Keep in mind majority would have to agree that this acceptable. Rather than screw the majority, I do this for the very few.

If so be prepared for repercussions. The appropriate thing would have been to place this into an appropriate group who would give better feedback that actually want this type of story.

So I'm sorry about all the negativity but I hope this explains why this happened and how best to publish this piece. As for me and many others for that fact. It's not something we'd like to see logging into the site.

Mmmmm. That's some good stuff.

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I think there might be some confusion here

I didn't put this in any groups. Literally just posted the story for the person who paid me to write it and the wonderful weirdos who actually like the things I write for whatever reason.

I don't write this sort of thing for your approval, uce. I write these things because it's fun, and I post them here because a shocking amount of people like to read it. That's all the invitation I need.

Your analogy is inherently flawed because FiMFic isn't an all lady festival. It's not an all anything festival. It's a collection of various different groups and subgroups with a myriad of different tastes. I don't like shitty romcom stories, and I'm sure I could find some stats to show that the "majority" agrees with me, but that doesn't mean shitty romcoms shouldn't be allowed on the site.

I've been doing this for quite some time now, and lemme tell you something that a lot of people don't understand: most people don't care what I write. They shouldn't. Because, at the end of the day, what I choose to write has no influence on their lives.

I knew this would happen. I knew that a good chunk of people would reject this story. I don't write for them.

Again, peace out and read something you want, uce, it don't make a difference to me

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Luna will? Celestia did both before, and nothing was ever said about Luna not being able to control the Sun..

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Luna and/or Twilight could easily raise the sun in Celestia's absence.

Trust me, she dead, uce

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Or you need to stop clicking on stories you are more then aware you are not going to enjoy just to complain about them.

The control system is that they trust people to be smart enough to read stories they know they won't enjoy, which in your case has failed.

Thusly, I continue my search for content. You did what did and who's to blame ya? No one. That's who. You did your best and crikey that's all anyone could ask for.

I was on the premise you did this for you and didn't consider anyone else. Yet I was wrong and I apologize for that.

It is my fault for being negative as my standards are clearly too high. Haven't found a story I've wanted to read in some time now. The again that's my fault.

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Thank you for the feedback. I wanted to understand somethings and I did learn a thing or two. Thank you author and -ahem, patient commenter.

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when are ppl gonna frickin stop thinking the big white horse is an immortal goddess?? shes not a goddess, shes not immortal, all those are nothing but headcanons...

A brilliant piece on the morally corrosive effects of any society with capital punishment. The degeneracy of Equestria's rulers demonstrates the self-destructive nature of violence. Very well done.

Fuck you for posting this, and fuck this site for both allowing this content and not having tag filtering in TYOL 20 fucking 19.

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Well, you don't live to be 3,000 without at least a little immortality

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Let's not make this any more controversial than it already is, uce

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Thanks for reading

Interesting as an idea but ick. I don't want stricter controls on the site but better tagging might be a good idea (like an Ick tag).

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I genuinely find it interesting that this is the story that garnered the most backlash.

As to your point about tags... I tagged this story with all manner of "dead dove do not eat" tags. What mire warning could you want? What is in the story that wasn't fairly warned?

Not being a dick, genuinely asking

Well, I am more then a year late but I need to ask. Why do you write these types of story's? I'm not trying to be an arse I'm just curious

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A number of reasons, the chief of which being that it's fun. Think slasher movies, Mortal Kombat, hard core bdsm porn, and wrap it all into one. That's essentially what these stories are.

Another, slightly less important, reason is that people are willing to pay for it.

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