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I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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delta_k #1 · Jul 8th, 2018 · · 5 ·

Oh happy days! Rejoice, masses, for there is another Headless Rainbow story!!

9032568
Well I know I'm rejoicing! A little. I'm still sad the show didn't end like this though.

Not bad, I do wonder why the CMC didn't show up on this one.

9032671
I almost had them show up. Maybe if I ever do a sequel to it. Maybe

9032568
I like how people down-voted your comment, like they went to the comments expecting to see people ridiculing me and were angry when no one was. Or maybe they thought they'd shame you into hating me :rainbowkiss:

9032814
Now there is a balance.
I don't believe this one needs a sequel. It's perfect as a one-shot.

D48
D48 #7 · Jul 8th, 2018 · · 2 ·

:rainbowlaugh: Well, it looks like you're in top form today, and reading this makes me wonder if the show's staff deliberately tailored Starlight for this kind of thing because it really seems that way to me. Hell, even with how over the top and bloody hilarious this story is, it makes far more sense than what they do with her in canon so there's a small part of me that wonders if someone was deliberately tailoring her for this behind McCarthy's idiotic back.

9032827
Agreed. This is a good place to leave this one, and there's no reason Starlight can't snuff them in another story, ideally along with their sisters for extra entertainment.

Nice to see your still around.

Wow, I just disregard your vote ratio now a days as it's not a accurate representation of your work. It's clear you cater to a niche audience and the rest find themselves offended by the material in which case why did they even click on it. They're given fair warning going in on what to expect and if they still read it well that's on them. The fact that some of your stories can get such high votes means you're doing something right like "Celestia's Relaxing Vacation" with over 400 up to over 600 down. Anytime a story can get that many up votes is impressive especially given it's subject matter. So keep it up you glorious, depraved, disturbed son of a bitch, and godspeed to ya.:heart:

9033885

What led you to the conclusion that the down votes were from people who hated the story? Between the comments left and the fact that the story has been featured at least once I've been working off of the assumption people are down voting for the sake of it regardless of how they feel about the story.

9034007
This story was featured at least once? As I said before, I refuse to believe this without proof.

9034007

and the rest find themselves offended by the material

Never said they only hated the story it's self. I'm sure most all the down votes are from people who never read the story at all which is a shame they would just down vote something because they don't like the themes in it.

9034496
I think they were referring to "Celestia's Relaxing Vacation" which I think was featured at some point.

Also I managed to get your monies, defiled or not give us back Rainbow's head already.:rainbowlaugh:

i hope there will be a sequel

9032814
They'll never shame me into doing anything. It turns me on too much :rainbowwild:

What’s this? Not even 7k words for killing the entirety of the mane 6 (+spike). Shameful, when I read your stories I expect this much writing, (okay, maybe more like 4-5k) per character, not all of them combined.

This is clearly evident in the like to dislike ratio. Most of your other stories have a much (relatively speaking) better rating.

9034752

Never said they only hated the story it's self. I'm sure most all the down votes are from people who never read the story at all which is a shame they would just down vote something because they don't like the themes in it.

I meant that it's possible that there are people downvoting even when they like the stories. I'm mostly basing this off of my memory of the comments from some of the earlier stories about how weird the vote ratio was.

9035726
I've written too many multi-chapter "Character X Kills Everypony and takes over Equestria" stories though. Not everyone wants to read one that long. Also I have other large projects that I can't really distract myself from with a long snuff-fic right now, at least not unless I get an idea I think is really good or unique for a long story.
Thanks for honest feedback and a vote though. The score right now isn't accurate compared to my other stories, since they always get a flood of down-votes when they're on the front page. Many improved their ratio over time since people that find them later are more likely to have been looking for something like this.

9035167
Noooo! We'll never see it again!:raritycry: Except in those photos you keep sending molesting it with your futa parts.

9035784
Really, to have liked it and down vote it! Tis madness I say!

>That part where Twilight comes in right when Spike dies on Starlight's dick, then gets showered with Starlight's spunk.

Hnnnngggg!

9052349
Was that you cumming or dying? Because the sound people make when they do both of those things can be surprisingly similar!

Okay, okay, okay. This is really not my thing, I know I won't be able to stomach it, but..

What the hell is a reverse blow job!??!

9129740
It's when someone decapitates their victim and then fucks the neck hole so their cock exits their mouth.

9130113
Ahhh. Okay, that makes sense! Thank you! *Hurriedly runs away.*

Love it!!! Though I'm kinda worried for the people who down voted your story... Since they came here, and you did put up a disclaimer that this is gonna be bad... I'm worrie for their sanity, you know?

Though all and all this? Was amazing!

9229294
Sadly putting responsible warnings on it gets me more downvotes. How dare I warn them instead of surprising them! Maybe they're angry because they like surprises.

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Or they are headless chickens and randomly open a fic read it, get upset and down vote it!

How dare they! There should be a window pop up saying 'Risk your own sanity'

I know I'll regret this when I have a mental war in my head once my conscience returns from wherever it's gone, but I've finished this story.

... Someone tell me a word for something repulsing and attractive at the same time, 'cause I want to use it.

9400813
I know it's been a few months, but would guilty pleasure describe how you feel?

9508644
It would, and it's the best I can think of now, but really, it might be beyond the league of mere words.

That was pretty good, but a few things:

  • The little touch of ponies urinating in death was for some reason only done on two that were being rutted vaginally. It would've been more appropriate to happen on ones taken anally or to come out after Starlight pulled out, as it's kinda weird the urine got out entirely while the cum couldn't at all.
  • Fluttershy is by far the easiest pony to scare, so she really should've peed herself either when the spell was taken off or when the snake pulled out of her.
  • As for the bowels, it's a bit odd that out of 6 ponies, a dragon, and a snake, all subjected to extreme fear and then death; none shat themselves (or even farted). When Starlight came free of Fluttershy's rear, would've expected something to slip out. Rarity would've been another likely candidate, which would be especially demeaning to her personally.
  • The story basically has two phases of equal length, that of the the 5 and the snake and that of Spike and Twilight. It would probably have been better to split this into two chapters. Yes, I know, 6k words is already not very long and FiMfiction now has some resume functionality, but it really helps for these kinds of stories where so much goes on to have a nice resting point.
  • Story of course comes last behind things like bodily function oddities, but still, Starlight's insanity here isn't fully explained. Would've been funny (in an ironic way) if it was due to a contingency spell Twilight set up in case Starlight went crazy that malfunctioned in trying to knock the evil out of her and ended up knocking out the emotions that led to her becoming a villain, making her an outright sociopath.
  • When Twilight stumbled onto Starlight, I think she was just a little too casual at seeing Spike die and getting a face full of cum. Would've made more sense if she had charged like she does with villains, but stumbled and messed up the spell spectacularly, only to be coated in cum while she's down.
  • Rarity's death was a little on the weak side. AJ should've gotten messier with her or Starlight should've pulled out some organs to be sure (Rarity is the only one who could've survived).
  • You overused the word "muzzle". It's used 16 times in the story, and there are two paragraphs that contain it three times.

9509312
Thanks, those are good ideas. Pity I didn't have you as an editor. If you enjoy editing stories like this, PM me, since you gave some really helpful suggestions.

i really like the way she controls them into killing themselves. somehow both consensual and non consensual snuff at the same time. very hot

9614867
Consenting snuff is strangely hot, I should do more of it.

i tip my hat and applaud the master, that was some good shit hehe

If there is a fanfic writer whose existence proves that the Up vote/Down vote system is totally worthless to determine the quality of his work, that would be you.
May you never stop writing, you creative and twisted devil.

9723447
It's clear that most of the downvotes on this account are people-whining-about-content related, I'm sure most have never read the story and just looked at the warnings. How dare I do proper warnings so they don't read about things they won't want to, right? Meanwhile, the erotic-only and clean stories on my other accounts do consistently well. A recent one even sat at the top of the feature box for 3-4 days.

I don't think most people understand what the up/downvote system is supposed to be for.

9725295
You have another acount?

I liked the snake
Made for a bit more variety

9853212
Always wanted to have Fluttershy murdered by one of her precious animals.

9853748
Ceberus could have a chewing toy ;p

Or crisp dragon roast.

I, as a person with various fetishes, should have read the fucking warning and walked away, I am never going to forget what I just read. Headless Rainbow, this is of great quality, the dialogue is good, the grammar is good, and the story is good (to some), so this is a great fanfic, but the content of it shall haunt my nightmares for lifetimes to come.

10204289
If you like my writing, but not the content, try my erotic-only account. You can try my clean account too, but some of the writing there is rather old and not what I'd consider high-quality.

10205298
Thanks, but this isn’t coming out of my head so I might as well embrace it. I’m sure this won’t be the worst thing I read.

9509335
DONT WORRY ABOUT A THING BECAUSE EVERY LITTLE THING IS SNUFF STORIES SOMEHOW!

Comment posted by Haver deleted Mar 27th, 2022

Welp, this is horrifying. 11/10, well done.

All it's missing is some nose booping and romantic hoof holding. That would have been a step too far.

Hm only thing is… Discord may not take Fluttershy departure well…

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