Hello again, after conversing with a friend about the revision some things came up that could greatly expand on what I originally planed. I was going to expand and go into more detail about Twilight's upbringing with Sombra which I'm still doing, but it came up that maybe I should make a dual perspective and also cover how Shining's life was altered and make him a more prominent character. Maybe make him more than just a guard possibly some what of a pupil to Celestia like Twilight would have

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