Mar
26th
2018
Question? · 4:31pm Mar 26th, 2018
Hello again, after conversing with a friend about the revision some things came up that could greatly expand on what I originally planed. I was going to expand and go into more detail about Twilight's upbringing with Sombra which I'm still doing, but it came up that maybe I should make a dual perspective and also cover how Shining's life was altered and make him a more prominent character. Maybe make him more than just a guard possibly some what of a pupil to Celestia like Twilight would have been but in a different capacity. Before I go forward I'd like that hear what you guys think of this or am I just trying to do too much and should just focus on Twilight. Let me know what you think.
I think it's a good idea.
I think it would be good to have the dual perspective at some point, how Sombra felt and saw it. Shining's is also a good one, although maybe better to have Shining explain what he has done without Twilight to her, or to Sombra later on.
Good idea
I would love to see this, or a sequel to the main story. But it’s been 4 years…