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Estrus Season

And it lasts all year long.

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Wow I leave for a few hours after this story finally gets posted and come back to 20 favorites and 15 up votes, damn! Strangely no comments though.

Over 20 up votes within 12 hours of posting. I didn't think this story would have this good of start. Thank you everyone.:heart:

This story has a great start, I can see a lot of potential from this story. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

You definitely have my interest and I look forward to what you have planned for the story:twilightsmile:. also if you don't already have one look for an editor, some of the way it's written made it awkward to go thru for me at least:twilightblush:

For the love of all things unholy, how did you come up with this first?!? Damn, this looks like it's going to work.

I know! I couldn't believe no one though of having Sombra go back in time and do something like this either. Or at least do something to change the timeline.

Interesting, Intriguing...Fascinating. :moustache:

Not many corrupted/tyrant Sparkle fics on this site, I will keep an eye on this. It is defiantly a unique approach to the idea.

It's almost been 24 hours since the story was approved and posted. 50 up votes to 3 down votes and a lot of faves.:pinkiegasp: I never ever thought this story would do this well in the first day, and off of one, ONE chapter that's not even 2,000 words long. Shit! A big thank you to all my readers.:heart: The only way this could have been better was if it got featured, but who knows in a couple chapters it could happen.

Mehehehehehe another where Twi goes bad this should be interesting.

Sweet! I can never turn down a good corruption story. Can't wait to see what you got!Might wanna fix this though

Smobra charged at her through the cave tunnel

I think it's Sombra:derpytongue2:

Love it so far and will be watching you.

i wounding if twilight her future vision try go back and time.
like tell past celestia and wait.

Sombra was much more efficient in defeating Starlight. Would be interesting to see how alicorn Twilight deals with the corpse in her castle, will she call the authorities and risk been accused of murder or will she bury her in her backyard? Who knows. :pinkiecrazy:

:pinkiegasp: 80 up votes! I-I need to sit down I got me a case of the vapors.:twilightsheepish: If chapter one alone gets this story up to a 100 up votes I think I'll have a heart attack. Climb baby climb!

For all intensive porpoises it very well could have been, or could be in the not so far off future, I've seen stories featured with less likes than this.

All the more reason to write hastily however, or the hype will simmer down and the algorithm will dump you.

90 up votes. You know what. You guys are so awesome you deserve an update. Enjoy chapter 2 and let me know what you think.

I like this. Not many corruption stories on here, so I'm gonna track this.
Also, try to expand how the scenes flow. It seems...Rushed...To me. But that's just my opinion, besides, the story is great!

Some commas are missing, and the flow itself seems kinda stunted and rushed. But it is a wonderful story anyway, so keep it up!:pinkiehappy:

good chapter, I half expect for later on twilight betray her father and takes over,

So Sombra confesses to kidnapping Twilight and she doesn't care? Man that's twisted!!

Sadly, I can not upvote the same story twice.

You have to remember Sombra has been twisting Twilight's point of view for basically her entire life and teaching her what he perceives to be right and wrong. So taking Twilight was more of a career move then an act of cruelty.

7865000 well i'd say his lessons paid off. Welcome to Evil Parenting 101

If my assumption is correct, this will be a great story but I'll hate where it's headed. It'll be great even if I'm wrong so we'll see.

Twilight and Sombra make always a good evil combination. A great story so far. :raritywink:

We have a feeling this will be a good story, We cannot wait for more

That is the most likely course of action for villains, backstabbing each other. But then again, Sombra probably have a backup plan for that (he know what she is capable of after all). He's probably kept some powerful spells a secret as well just so only he can use them.

leaving only Shining’s armor behind.

I admit, that stumped me for a sec there.

memories is the key!

too bad shinning armor can't show his memories to twilight.
or ask look to his mind and memories and show twilight when was a baby and who true family is.

Wow this is good stuff! Keep it up:twilightsmile:

to the floor with a pool of blood begging to form under her.

Think it should be beginning.

The Crystal Ponies wondered around

Think this should be wandered

The pair payed the peasants

This should be paid

(Set initially during part 1 of the season 5 finally and shifts to technically sombraverse territory)


Twilight basically raped her brother. That will definitely shatter his mind in time.

Well she kind of did but I think rape might be too strong of word for what happened. He was enjoying it at the end.

Comment posted by TheAllSeeingEye deleted Apr 15th, 2017

wow..that was an unexpected turn of things!:rainbowlaugh: keep it up!:raritywink:

Could use more gore. (Yes, I know I'm sick in the head:pinkiecrazy:)

So did future Sombra kill past Sombra? If so how is he still alive?

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