Luna wakes up one morning to discover she might have more in common with Celestia than she ever thought possible.
Featured: 07/01/2018 - 07/03/2018
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Fiaura
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:) you should think about making one for twilight and it's a awesome story BTW. First comment Yay!!!!!!
This was cute for a short little thing.
Luna looks like she has a tumor.
Short, cute, and relatively harmless. Well done.
Oh god this story was so funny and hilarious that there is something that I must do
Praise the Moon and Sun butt! Though Luna is best Princess
i thoroughly enjoyed it, and to see luna struggle with the fact that she is growing up adorable.
Cute slice of life story. You do a great job getting in to the heads of the sisters. I will say It dances right on the edge of a E rating. It some what suggest of. But then again the show MLP dose the same thing some times.
I have to say, this made me smile despite the stressful morning of work that led up to me sitting here and reading this. Well done!
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I'm glad it made you smile.
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Exactly! That is exactly what we did and hoped to maintain.
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Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed and yeah I thought that maybe someone should pull this off.
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Praise the Sun in the Morning and smile when the Full Moon Rises.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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Yep you got first, surprisingly as it hit 11 upvotes before someone commented.
Yeah, I can see that:
9019015
Exactly! That is wow I should totally do this.
I admit it was more fun and far better handled than I thought it would be. Celestia was so OOC during the breakfast but you clearly knew what you were doing with her as shown in the next scene. There might be a legit case of this being rated T with all the references to princessly needs and stallions in beds. Also I would have laughed out loud if there was a short ending where Flash Sentry came to deliver his letter in person and Luna just asked her to come inside her room...
EDIT: Posterior scriptum: For some werid reason I think Blueberry Blossom is a fantastic name for a pony. Alliterations ho-oooh!
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I had to make Celestia step just slightly out of bounds with her trollish nature in hopes of getting the proper effect. I'm glad you kept on and enjoyed.
And I have learned a very hard lesson about writing ponies; if you name it, you have to give it a backstory, personality, and also make them into something.
Having been to Fort Benning for training way back when, trust me, Soldiers can be quite a crude lot.
I'm pretty sure any guard worth their salt would know that laughing at Luna's butt to her face and making fun of it when she isn't looking would be a fast track to getting fired instead of flirted with.
9019080 Names are really dangerous that way. Ever since Man was a young species and learned to communicate, we've ever since tried to control what we know by giving it a name. Hence why even in the Bible Moses shouts out to the burning bush "What is your name?" so he could control the supernatural around him. Ever since then it's been the same with humans: Every single thing, idea, object and person needs a name, or it loses its (hur de hur) identity. In this case, though, I don't really think you need to do too much more about BB. Her name gives a nice idea of her looks and personality. I guess sometimes it's okay for background ponies to stay background ponies.
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You would be surprised and shocked the number of jokes that soldiers across the ages share with each other.
As referenced to Elizabeth I in the Middle Ages from her personal guard journals they referred to her as: "Elizabeth the Squealer" in private.
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yes but perhaps you have given me inspiration to write something like: "A day in the life of a Palace Servant."
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Yes, but I was referring more to the seeming willingness of everyone to openly mock Luna while she's in clearly compromising positions and right there in front of them.
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ya I think that is fair but this is a moment between siblings you quoted; the only open mocking point was when Celestia went a bit above and beyond.
And more Celestia thinking of the Worst Case Scenario for Luna.
This part is a little messed up, Celestia enters the room and then tries to open the door just after. Also to me there's too much difference between the teasing Celestia who puts Luna that public mocking and the remorseful Celestia who admits she had an absolutely terrible time going through the same thing. If there was more a buildup to the teasing then I would understand it but Celestia just jumps straight to the worst part in a snap. If it was an accident, like Celestia making that joke just when the guards burst in so they hear, I could understand it but as it stands there's just too much disconnect for me. Fun read all the same.
9019145 I'd read it.
A delightful read, MLP could use more slice of life stuff like this.
Amusing read, thanks Fi.
Slight typo though
you used a second To in a confusing place
9019291
Fixed.
9019286
I've got more Slice of Life stuff and another major Pony Crossover working on now. As well as your Dead Tree fun.
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Glad to know I should do this!
9019193
Sorry you feel that way. I'll keep in mind how to present punchlines like this in the future.
9019423
There is nothing pornographic or suggestive about it.
Not to mention, it is done in the same style as Celestia is done for the show itself just with the artist adding their own flare and detail.
I actually had artist draw Luna with Celestia's body first then do the drawing afterward.
If that is truly your issue; then wow. I'm very surprised you manage to watch the show.
9019423
There is less detail here than the butt of a Barbie doll
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I kind of have to agree with Headie here.
That or you are very sheltered.
Good day and good luck; but I doubt you will enjoy very much here with that attitude and I'm obviously not the author for you. Not to mention, I don't know anyone that writes well, that would be an author for you in my circle of friends.
If you think this is bad; well, you haven't even cut the top of the surface of what I put up with at Cons as a Community Guest.
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PS
My Little Pony is classified Anime in Japan by Japan. The Japaponycon is one of the largest in the world and it's classified as an Anime Convention.
Meaning, My Little Pony, is Anime or at the very least; Amerime.
9019448
As a father I have no problems with my little girl seeing that cover
9019481
*Points at* And this is one of my subscribers I ran this by before we used it as a cover. An actual Parent whom I've met and his little girls are Angels.
9019423
How does it feel to be so sheltered and weak that a PICTURE offends you
9019525
Much harsher than I would have put it. But Appropriate.
9019545
Glad you enjoyed it :)
I got a good laugh from this. Very well written, and enjoyable all around.
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Luna spreading her cheeks to the audience, plus a mention of marehood in the title, is at least suggestive of the undrawn focus of the picture. I won't claim it's pornographic, but to say it's not at least suggestive is too far.
9019671
Glad you enjoyed it.
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I literally watched the episodes of Cadence and Shining Armor talking about having a baby as well as how they interact as a couple.
I made sure not to push the envelope further than that while at the same time; playing a joke at those whom come here for clop.
I appreciate your feedback, just the way the first person came off as was I was suppose to be ashamed and I'm bad for making them think of it. When I ran this by several parents raising small children in my own discord first. They were all fine with it, Headdie is an example.
This was a heart warming one off.
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I'm glad, I have another one that is multi-chapter using Luna and some OCs. I am very happy you enjoy it though.
Man you don't want to be Teasing Cadence like that... She'll turn it around on you she's a smartcookie that one is.
9019805
Someone has already suggested a Twilight version am I planning for 2 sequels now?
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No no i am more talking about how Cadence is smart and will likely tease Luna back for teasing her. With it being Cadence you can bet it's gonna be a clever retort