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Fiaura


Hi, Yes I'm Queen Quake, Wandering Sunrise, and Tread Lightly - I like Explosions, 40K, Ponies, Anime, and Explosions....that's about it. Check me out on YouTube just search Fiaura ;)

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Bone Daddy has lived for several hundred centuries. Most of what made him equine and anything like his pony brethren has long since been lost to the cold dead ravages of study. He published medical papers through the decades and was funded by Princess Luna from well before she ever became Nightmare Moon. Now, something has arrived, a tiny package that he must deal with. A package that is alive and breathing still, with an innocence that might save him.

Editor:
Enigmatic Otaku

Artwork by:
Cover:
Glacier Frostclaw

In Story:
Trees

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Chapters (6)
Comments ( 157 )

oh my god you did it,,, i thought you were joking .

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well crap looks like i am gonna have to start reading even though i got stats class,,,, also in the description i think you mean innocence no innocent, also is the lich a unicorn i cannot see a horn in picture?
ah had to zoom in the angle kinda hid horn

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And I will enjoy the fact you are watching ;)

Nice story. (•_•)
But I like my daddies... ( •_•)>⌐■-■
B O N E L E S S (⌐■_■)

So, y'know we could have some B O N E L E S S pizza together.

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I imagine you do ;)

So Life Sapphire is sounding like the antithesis of Bone Daddy. I can only imagine the looks of all the parents seeing the Lich with this little Filly.

Wait, has his name always been Bone Daddy?

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All the dirty horrible looks.

There are some things that make me question my reality...

This is one of them.

I like the general idea. Here are some things I noticed: You might want to consider making use of more complex sentences, I think that someone of such age and intelligence would be a bit more eloquent. I also thought it a bit weird that the doctor starts screaming the second he sees him, then the skeleton guy wants to punch him all of the sudden and immediate reset back to normal.

Also is Maulwurf used intentionally?

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Maulwarf is the creature from the episode: To Change a Changling.

I am using less complex sentences intentionally but it is something I will consider changing if I decide to rewrite parts.

He's a Lich whose only emotion has been mind annoyance for a few centuries, his emotional spectrum coming back is a bit random but you are right, I will calm the randomness just a little.

Thanks ;)

You have my attention I await more. :twilightsmile:

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Working on more, be out Wednesday.

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*rubs hooves together* excellent

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You are so excited about that.

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Hey fan fiction is kind of my thing, throw in a little bit of a morbid aesthetic and it just makes my day. Also the idea of this creature most would flee from taking care of a little filly I find sweet. Reminds me of this other story that has a similar relationship between Sweetie Belle and Sombra. Sadly that story hasn’t updated in over a year. :fluttercry:

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This is the first of 8 cute story prompts from my subscribers in addition to the FoE thing.
So once I finish this, expect another cute thing to pop up Soon™

so fare it not bad at all for a cute short story. And I am sure the name make people think the worse about the story. But I think the name add to it when you know what the story is about.

You do know your little pic above the little pony is a unicorn and not a earthpony.. But can not wait to see where the story goes from here.

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Someone is seeing the hidden meanings.

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There is a custom piece being done that should be finished before I release the next part.

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dang it fi first chapter of my dumb idea in and you already plucking on heart strings.

bone daddy has a thing for luna. I see he is a man of culture and class, also i agree with bone daddy this seems a bad idea!

getting more swallow, i think it should be shallow,,, only typo i seen in story so far

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Wait till the final chapter

Your way of writing is simple and straightforward...and I like that. It's easier to follow the story.
I'm intrigued by the plot, too. I'm eager to see how the story will go on.
I put the story on the "tracking list", hoping to see the next chapter soon.
Cheers :)

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Glad you enjoy it, the ending is written. I am currently working on making a song for it.

This is going to get sad and make me cry is it? It a good story so fare. but I can see the hand writing on the wall here. and some thing bad going to happen. Well I will have to come back for the next part and find out now.

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The last part is ready and yes it will make you cry or wish you could.

Fiaura no! No sad ending! I like these two way too much for a sad ending!

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It will be an ending worth reading.

This is a beautiful chapter! So many stories seem to have happy endings... It's nice to see something that's more bitter sweet. If felt a little rushed with him giving his life for her, but now that I've read it, I don't think I could see it any other way

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So many people thought he was gonna turn her into an undead or that there was some other ending but all of them had him living.
No one, NOT one person predicted he would be the one dying.

God... damnit Fi...
That song is to bueatiful.

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Job done! We have an actual musical version being made for spite.

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I applaud you for it! We need more stories like this. Life isn't always happy, so why should all stories be happy?

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Exactly! Except more out of me.

A very bittersweet ending for Bone Daddy. But his memory will live on. Life Sapphire will never forget her Bone Daddy or his sacrifice.

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Someone wants to write about Life Sapphire but I'm unsure how.

Dame you FIaura I know that it would make me cry. That was a great end to a beautiful story. There was a few small typos But I lost track of them just want to get to the end. And I have to think that anyone who read this and did not have a tear in there eye at the end is not human or pony or is lying to them self. that was both a sad and wonderful end. *claps*

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I'm glad you enjoyed, this is the end I planned from the very beginning and I am happy to give you the feels for the day.

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Oh I will~~ your writing is like a delicious cake. One piece will not be enough

It's been a long time since Ive read a story that brought me to tears:fluttercry:. It was beautiful. And the song you'd literally have to be heartless not to fell sad for that poor filly. You did an amazing job.:applecry::pinkiesad2:

going to want to read this.

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