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Finally done with the caravan! Now we can see Verik become the warlord he was always meant to be!
Remind me this.
i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/001/346/822/606.gif
Oof. Can't help but grin as I read this chapter, knowing that Verik is more than going to earn his keep regardless of the chief's reluctance to accept him.
Now the Empire building shall begin!!
Good luck with the next two weeks. Don't worry, we can wait.
9190204
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZN0vysCzu24
Empire management in a nutshell
i really hope things go well for him and asha, i have the chief pegged as a traitor personally.
9190691
HAH! That was fun to watch! Love that song they played in the background too.
9191001
Oh my dear griffon, you already know life would never be so simple.
9190204
Question remains as to HOW.
Really liking it, hope you write more soon.
Is this a much more fast paste and sane version of my own Zebrica theme story?
9197745
Our two stories hold nothing in the same light, not even the backgrounds, history, characters, themes, etc. After looking your story over quickly... We are nothing alike, at all. You know what we have in common? Using the word "Zebrica" and a non-zebra main character.
Edit: Did you even take a quick glance at my story? We are nothing alike.
I've never been a fan of Antro and has been the reason I've avoided this story since I've seen it. Glad I finally decided to ignore that tag and just go and read this story once. I haven't been disappointed so far.
9199509
Thank you for the compliment and I hope it continues to impress!
9197745
Your stories are nothing alike, Nava. I like reading your stories so don't let the fame go to your head.
9199826
I never said anything about fame. I just stumbled upon this story one day and took note of its name and description alone.
About a dude waking up in the equestrian version of Africa.
This story is very enjoyable, and it is different! Most stories revolve around Equestria or its surrounding neighbors, and even I am guilty of this fact, and yet your story is extremely off the over beaten path, so much so, there are skeletons on the side of the roads leading to larger cities.
I understand why you have the characters occassionally speak broken or improper english, but I only have this to say. You use the word 'loose' in many chapters, but that's improper in a different sense. Loose, would be used to loosen a belt, or she Loosed and arrow.
-then there is the word 'lose'. He has nothing to lose, but everything to gain. If he were to let loose a fart, others would lose their composure.
Other than that 1 mistake, I am loving your story... I dont know when I marked it as 'read later', but I am glad I came across your story nonetheless.
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Thank you and as for the loose/lose part: this has been brought up so many times I lost count. Not going back to edit this many chapters since I am on 66+ at this point. May you continue to enjoy reading the story as there are more skeletons yet to be found.