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Saw the title, already intrigued.
This seems to be a good read.
Interesting, let's see where this goes.
Tracked and Faved if for nothing more then it's Different, Will read the first chapter later as I don't have the time right now
Insert a comma between the underlined word pairs.
Like, really, the biggest problem I kept finding in this chapter was that you didn't use a comma even though you should have 95% of the time.
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Your Pfp is top quality
rofl that guy got slapped
This seems like something worth reading, 'tis not every day you find a HIE with an ounce of sense betwixt his ears.
Do NOT try and pronounce these names in "perfect English." It will end badly.
Tryn stop me
It’a been a while since I’ve read a fic with such quality of writing.
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Thank you!
There are a few odd points in the grammar and spelling, but I think the biggest issue is that you need to add more commas. The story is very interesting so far and I can't wait to see more!
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70 chapters in I am not going back to edit the first 10.