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I love how this story reminds me of when I read Shogun back in high school. A slow-burning, character driven epic about a stranger in a strange land, who uses his wits and wiles to make his way up the societal ladder, befriending outcasts and kings alike as he strives towards his ultimate goal.
And just like with shogun, I’ve found myself very much attached to these characters and invested in their individual stories. I can’t wait so see what happens when their stories start merging and intersecting.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you, I hope those future chapters do not disappoint.
That's my girl Asha.
Any inter species problem can be solved with enough humping.
Verik about to find there are worse things then waging war and thats young children lots of em oh the horror
Ok... I do not understand the premise of putting sex in the story when the main male character is so anti sex and when he is not anti-sex he's cucking himself. Real talk to the writer I do not understand what you're trying to push.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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If you call "anti-sex" not fucking anything that moves after three weeks... Then yes, he has moral standards and keeps his pants zipped up.
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The guy has straight up killed multiple people and is planning on doing a lot more killing and shows little to no regret but when it comes to sex he now is a pillar of moral standards. That takes a lot of bizarre mental gymnastics and just makes him look unhinged.
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Not even slightly unless your a snowflake, killing criminals and bandits is perfectly normal; especially when they are trying to kill you. Also its called WAR. He is planning a war, not a scuffle down at the bar. Anyone who cries over dead bandits is a snowflake, Verik is a MAN and not a modern snowflake thing. And yes, killing without regret, especially when they know why they killed the other bastard is perfectly normal and not tear inducing. I dont know who started this snowflake thing of seeing killing as horrible but I write to the old standards where killing is normal and quite NOBLE when you do it for the right reasons. I do NOT pander to the modern "oh my god he hurt someone" snowflake crowd.
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'Snowflake' you keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means but either way you're missing what I'm getting at. When it comes to combat the guy's a confident and in control steely-eyed killer but for some reason when it comes to sex he becomes a sixteen-year-old white knight with a fedora all I'm wondering is why the personality shift?
Told is the correct word
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It's not a personality shift. When he was thrust into this world he now resides he was exposed to the brutal ways of it and the extremely clear kill or be killed situations that exist all over it. A relationship is not the only unfamiliar territory, but so is the prospect of bringing a life (one of his own genetically) into a war torn wasteland. What you are implying and seemingly confused about could be compared to wondering why the vault hero from Fallout could kill bandits and cannibals but somehow be respectful to women. People have their own sets of morals for each individual circumstance, and he has never been disrespectful to or acted to prey on women, so in what world would keeping with that be a personality shift? He can kill when it clearly calls for it but shouldn't be able to have "lighter" views when it comes to other things? Apples and oranges. It's like saying soldiers can't come back from war and be loving fathers. Everything he has planned has been extremely clearly outlined by previous chapters to be for the creation of a world he can raise a family in. Also, the main character you seem to be desiring who has absolutely no moral standards whatsoever, is the definition of unhinged and completely one dimensional (not realistic), not the character we are presented with now who like nearly everyone in real life has different views on different subjects and situations. This is a story with substance, not a mindless clop fic.
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Fixed.
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Daemon6 put it quite well, read what he said.
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Correct and well said.
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Ok maybe I'm not articulating this correctly maybe I'm using examples that means something to me and maybe not other people. What I'm saying is the guy acts like an adult in all situations except his romantic ones where he acts like an inexperienced teen, or maybe I'm just reading something that's just not there (throws arms in the air) who knows.
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He is a gentleman first of all and also has no idea what he is doing romance wise and being so was something that never came up in his former life. A few chapters even cover aspects of this where he muses over the proper way of handling the situation and his own inexperience in dealing with women/mares. The only reason Verik and Asha have not synched it thus far is because Altayih interrupted them and also because they are almost always too exhausted from their daily labors which is very, very real. You are getting caught up with modern thinking where fucking anything that moves is now normal and encouraged, whereas he on the other hand is a gentleman who keeps his pants zipped up until marriage. Chastity is the word, he is a chaste individual as is Asha though she is far more gung ho than he is. If you read without skimming you should have read at least one chapter where he spent some time thinking over how he is treating Asha and decides to move forward as he has chosen her as a wife. Catch is, they were interrupted the one time they were not dead on their feet or hooves.
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I think I'm beginning to understand. Sorry for cluttering up your comment section.
... was this story always anthro? Because I don't remember that from the last time I read this.
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Yes, it has always been anthro and it is even tagged as "Anthro."
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Yes I have, and I have checked your FA account. I only saw zebra drawings and nothing more. It's better off if you linked it.
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It is against Fimfiction rules to provide a link here or I will be BANNED. I am only allowed to hint and suggest on how to find certain things because "oh my god, tits!" On a site with rape, cannibalism, you name it. God forbid I provide a link to a profile that has a map but also shares pictures of naked zebras.
And yes the map is there, double checked. It is called "Eastern Zebrica."
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I can see it's been tagged, but yours wouldn't be the only time I'd seen a story retroactively change something like this. Nor would it be the first time I've misremembered something. I just wanted to know which it was.
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I know the rules here, my friend, and it isn't my intention to have your account banned whatsoever. I believe the fault lies with me because I was actually "looking for the map" and not at pictures containing characters within, so I can go back and look for it again thanks to you mentioning the name of said picture.
Also, while it is true that we cannot link anything that is NSFW, there is absolutely nothing wrong with linking your userpage, however. I made a blog post here that contains my FA userpage link on it and have no issues. Plus, guests on FA cannot see any mature or adult content until they make an account, so all they will see is SFW works and your profile page. Even so, they wouldn't see your map if it has been rated M or A, but we both know this.
Anyway, thanks again and I apologize if there was any misunderstanding.
I enjoy relaxing chapters like this one.
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Thank you for all the comments and I hope you do not get bored!
Hmm. The creche must be really bad if even the author leaves.